Like you keep saying that your grammar is bad and all, but like? I literally haven't even payed attention to that because your writing is so good. I probably wouldn't be able to find bad grammar If I tried because like, i don't really care.
So yeah, everything about this story was amazing. I especially liked the way you write aunt Cass.
I HATE CALLAGHAN AND KREI, like I want to kill them for what they did to Tadashi.
So yeah THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING

yes! i would love to read that!

Also no lie I am confused on the plot twist. Earlier in the story they mentioned that Krei wasn't in jail. (It might have ben the previous story in this series though...)

Was that the plot twist? Him being free? Him confessing? Him nearly killing Hiro?

I feel like your endings are very abrupt. You write out this good length story and then I see there's one chapter left and its just a random summary. I feel like not everything is directly resolved and that I'm missing out on some things. It may be because you make it an epilogue - either way its a bit disappointing to me. I want to know EVERYTHING. What fully happens to Krei? Does Hiro fully accept to going to school with Tadashi? Do they stay superheroes? Does Tadashi ever become one? Ect.

Other than that I really love this serious. It's an interesting turn of events based on the movie. There are plenty of stories about the movie but I really love this one. You keep the canon events as the backbone and work everything else around it. It's the story, but your version. You manage to write out anxiety well with good detail and description so that if [I'm assuming] someone never has had an attack they get a sense of what it is and what its like. I think you write the PTSD really well too; however I don't actually have it thankfully.

I would love to read more of your writing. I'm interested in reading what happened to Tadashi while he was gone too. I love this series, once again, and am kind of sad its over. :-( Haha. Keep up the amazing work though!

(Also every time you said you had vad grammar because no edit I really didn't find mistakes - though I wasn't looking - so don't worry about that its fine.)

Death... Ressurection...

Or drugs. Im assuming the latter lol

Callaghn is locked away at the thing didnt take place in the school. Why not go to school with your brother he is only there for you damn it.

Pissed off at the results of this chapter

Hiro must've placed them on Tadashi's grave and it means that Hiro wanted to let him know that he wants to let Tadashi rest in peace and that he loves Tadashi ! Heartfelt, I'm crying.

HOLY MOTHER OF GOD I AM DEAD. I ACTUALLY SCREAMED AT THAT TWIST. DUDE.

I'm really sad to see this story end, but I really enjoyed this thoroughly. The first and the second were great and I can't wait to see all of the third installment. I just read the first chapter of the third one, and I'm super excited for it. It's off to a great start. Which led me to this review. Even though I enjoyed this particular story A LOT, I had a hard time accepting the end. Particularly the last 3 chapters. I felt that everything was just...rushed and not planned as well as it could've been. Including that plot twist was a fine idea, and I definitely see the potential of it in "Im Okay". But I could not see it at all when you actually executed it in this story. It's just...I feel like things ended way too easily for Krei. I cannot think or see in any way where he would willingly give himself up or put himself in a precarious situation like that where he'd end up caught like a normal criminal and then throw his reputation and freedom in the wind by admitting his involvement, let alone have a random robot fight with BH6. He is a business man that owns a technological monster of a company that has many influences, including with the government. He is sneaky and very slick with his thoughts and words. AND HE'S SMART. He understands technology just as much as anyone else in this story. But I didn't see that and it threw me off. BH6 reaction I think was a little off too. How would they even go about confronting Krei when they themselves knew nothing? Tadashi didn't really elaborate and Krei is not the kind of person who would admit it. Or he's got the money, power and influence to cover it up. The end didn't make much sense or stand with the story to me.

That isn't to say that it was bad. Nor is it to say that you are a bad writer. I LOVED your stories and I'm so excited for the third. But I just felt like you tried to end it at a certain point and it felt like corners were cut. I hope you're not angry with me for voicing my opinion. Or thrown off later. Please keep up the good work and keep writing awesome stories!

He may not be all the way back, but he's got good people around him. Great job all around, looking forward to Part 3!

Loved this so much can't wait for the next ones!

how about we skip the torture story to the next part? Nooo! I want to continue reading the story but why must it entail the torture of Tadashi! I don't think I can handle that...

Oh boy ... Good story but that plot twist I really wasn't expecting.. I mean I like heartwarming Hamada Bros but the twist doesn't make sense.

For the next story you should have someone else besides Krei and Callaghan be involved with Tadashi's kidnapping and torture! Let's see here... Oh! I got one! Have Callaghan's daughter Abigail be somehow involve with the two men's plan please!

Can you please at have Abigail be involved with the fire and Tadashi's kidnapping too? Sorry, but I want to see something like that woven into the plot twist too because honestly I dislike this plot twist.