I don’t like this Maxmillian though.

Borrowing names to this extent is pretty unoriginal. Lazy.

They should not be trying to call Hunith “your majesty.” Majesty is for the reigning monarch. I think his wife too but I’m not sure.

I do like where this story is going. Also something else about light and darkness. Shadows can't exist without light so I feel like the ending to this story will be like I said where there is a union between the two the Greatest of Light paired with the Greatest of Darkness. Which like I said fits Morgana and Merlin perfectly after all with the whole 'she is the darkness to your light, the hatred to your love' the union would make quite a lot of sense.

Oh and Merlin basically is to Arthur what Gaius is or was to Uther. Heck for most the TV show it was basically like that, it only seemed like he wasn't when Arthur had his lows or needed someone to pick him up.

What I got from this is: Uther is a psycho who should burn in hell, the Pendragon madness comes from Love as the death of his wife made Uther full of hate and the supposed betrayal of Merlin made Arthur someone he wasn't, whilst Merlin's poisoning of Morgana made her hateful and full of rage at everybody.

It's a good chapter my only complaint is the cheesy writing and like cliche phrases but other than that it's all good.

I'm glad Merlin isn't so completely blind to accept Arthur's betrayal and Gwem's apparent lack of aid for her closest friend and confidant. I do hope he doesn't go and blindly forgive Arthur the moment he sees him and just agrees to do whatever he wants and it goes back to the dynamic where Arthur just lords over Merlin

Defo better although now I'm just thinking about what if Merlin accidentally despite his best efforts fell in love with Morgana and Morgana did the same. It would make sense a sort of union between the older ways and the old ways plus the two most strongest users of Magic combined as one ruling a kingdom does make for a interesting story. So that's what I'm hoping for, a Freylin to begin with but Mergana to wrap it up

Yeah definitely one of my lesser liked chapters but I know it'll hopefully get better the further in the story I go

I'll be honest I liked the previous chapters. But this is a bit too cheesy and the whole talk of the one bores me if I'm honest along with most of this chapter. Regardless, I shall forward on to see how things go and whatever happens to Gwaine

This is islamic lore crossovered with merlin lol

Hello! It's been a couple of months since you last updated but you don't need to worry I just wanted to send you my encouragement and hope that you can continue this story and hopefully, finish it. I really want to see how it ends and how Merlin and Arthur work out their relationship. I've just spent an entire night reading this fic and I'm amazed at your dedication to actually continue and finish it. Anyways, good luck and I wish you the best in life, where ever you are.

May you find what you seek...
Alsaya.

Been a couple months...can you update please?

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