Woo ~ Gawd damn this was magnificent!~

The way Murakumo lovingly detailed every scintillating, erotic part of Shiki's body reaffirmed that she's pretty much sexiness incarnate to her *o* Can't really blame blame her for being so distracted, hehe~

As cute as shrinking-violet Muracchi is, horny Oni Murakumo's pretty awesome too ~ Liking this new dynamic!~

But of course that dose of good, simple cuteness at the end was much appreciated too, hehe ~

Keep up the good work!

Holy... dayum this is hawt! Dayum! Just...DAYUM!

The bikinis, man! So flawlessly described, from the way they barely contained sexy Shiki's breasts to the way they were practically covering no part of her ass. I'm not surprised Murakumo had a nosebleed explosion. I'd prolly do the same *o*

When Murakumo finally went crazy and dominated Shiki where she lay, that was the hawtest thing evar *_* gaaaah bikini love is so sexy!

On a side note...wowwwwww. I had never seen Murakumo without her Haniya mask, but I just looked her up and she is freaking GORGEOUS! *O*

This was very pleasing to my vivid imagination. Very good ;D

I believe I said this three times already but damn I'm really beginning to love this pairing in some ways, both characters became instant favorites when they were first introduced I remember a skit in game that was very similar to this on I guess made super steamy, well as far as I can tell there's just one more story to read (beyond the spanish ones but I'm not sure) expect a review and final thoughts some time tonight till then WELL DONE MIKE.

Oh, my gosh! How could I have not realized that you yourself wrote a story about this pairing!? This is awesome as always! All the sexy outfits and such, and so adorable, too~! And that sex scene is awesome as always as well~! Yup! It's indeed Murakumo's inspiration (hence the title)

Anyways, sorry for the late review. But at least I got to read your Murakumo x Shiki fanfic! I guess I didn't look hard enough. Hehe~! Keep up the great writing! ;)

Sexy! Sexy! Sexy Shiki!

Murakumo having sexy fantasies about her blonde lover was so adorable! Then having a massive nosebleed after seeing her in a tastefully sexy outfit! XD
And I love how Shiki's going so far as to dress up in a sexy bikini for Murakumo is so adorable! And a green one to match her girlfriend's eyes! Amazing! :3 (And sorry about her uncomfortable... situation)

And just to get this of my chest... The sex scene is SUPER stimulating!

Overall: Sweet and Sexy FTW :)

Nice go on the valley-girl accent, really. It brought the Character to Shiki, for sure. I had no idea there were so many ways to describe a body, honestly...
Unless I don't think hard enough?
What is it, Mikey-kun?
What am I missing?
Too innocent.
Ahem... Back to the point...
Thank god Murakumo is /not ashamed to have her mask off around Shiki/.
That just tells so much in itself- that it's not just in vain for modeling or whatever it be called.
This... Was pretty cute, the innuendoes were smirk-worthy... Good jub!

Great (and very hot) story.

Kumo and Shiki are a very overlooked couple and is great to see them getting some love. Hope there are more SK in the future, I'd love to see some HomuraXAsuka or DaiXRin.

Again, fantastic work.

That was... well I don't think any word known could describe this.

It was alluring, hot and oh so delectable as always! I'm sad it even had to end in the first place. You did a great job. I might even go back reread this again before I log off. Keep up the great work! X3

lol this was quite an enjoyable read to be honest XD I started reading it a bit earlier but didn't get to finish until you linked me back about it. It's quite cute! Murakumo is such a shy girl, but she has a shockingly perverted mind XD Shiki loves it though, and she's totally playing to that side of her gf while enjoying every moment of it. Sorry I couldn't help you write more of it at the time, although I saw you did add and change up a bit of my little addition XD no matter, thanks for writing it!