I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I think I liked it better when the author's note was at the the chapter.

There is far too much of the author's note stopping this from being a good story. Condense and keep it sweet.

There goes another Jack Frost fic, this one focusing more on the A/N than the story. Tip: Anything you can in anyway sneak into your story, does not need to be in the author's note.

AWESOME!

Heya, I was just wondering if ur still working on this story or..?

I get the feelimg of inpending doom of romance. On mobile is there a way to search by genra and specific fan affilations? (Seriously don't know if I used that correctly but I think somebody understands)

Begining of the disclaimers: I only own the OC's and plot. Everything else is other ppl.
This page: I own nothing

Lol, ur awesome and really agree on the "No setting release dates." It is impossible to keep (experiance from my own books which I really hope will come out to be as good as urs)

Hey! I love love love the story (at least, for now there's no yucky romance) and ur doing great! A thing u might wanna look at, just a suggestion, sometimes the word thought is supposed to be though. I noticed it on some of the other chapters and figured it might help out with not confusing ppl.

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

I bet it's Pitch. Ik about the evil not welcome thing, but still

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for yet cute, please and thank you.

Tbh I was just plainly confused throughout the story without the line breaks. Heck, I still am xD

Tip, put extra space in between the lines in your paragraphs

This is soooo. Good I luv it XD