I’ll be honest, I couldn’t even finish the first chapter. The premise is a popular one for the fandom (lots of Soma meeting Erina before the entrance exam stories), but the grammar and typos? Those are sloppy errors that should never make it to publication. I know this is Fanfic, but it costs nothing to get a beta on this site to check over your work. Not to mention that, by your own admission, nothing changes in the story other than the two’s treatment of each other. That’s lazy. Small changes beget larger changes. If you ever decide to rewrite this, I’ll give it another shot.

Went from something fun to read to shit in just a couple paragraphs

Frogs are in French cusien

This is really good you should continue it

Will this story still be continued? I know you said that update times will be unstable but...it seems the last update was 4 years ago but u haven't mentioned anything about cutting it off...?

You know this chapter is hilarious in hindsight given the final boss has some relation to joichirou

Hope you gonna update your story soon.

Viva the story's update ️

"total mess"
yes

So not 'palatable'

~Snappy~

KAHAHAHAKK!
XD

~Snappy~

update the next chapter please you got me on the edge.

This story is really good. But why with the discontinnued. It's sad

Its spelled as Yukihira SOMA.

Jouichirou is lowkey almost as shitty a dad as Gin from HxH tbh.

Uggh sad
Please update author san