haha, how cute! Thank you for this adorable story!

Kaito going as Kid.
:D

And was the witch Akako?

So cute! Good job!

Very definitely boyfriend material. XD I love how NATURAL you made the entire magic thing. And the curse was just plain fascinating, esp the blessings stuff. Do you have any background info for this urban fantasy? Because eeee Shin'ichi exploiting magic SO HAPPY.

I really enjoyed this :) I thought you did an amazing job setting up the world it was in - like the way the magic works and how it's viewed? Everything was perfectly clear without it feeling forced or any big exposition dumps. It was just really well done :) Thanks for a great read .

This was FANTASTIC. I really have to give you props for the way you portrayed Shinichi. His thought process was so logical and in character, and it makes a really awesome contrast with the original story. I think it was cool how you were able to work magic into the story and had it make sense, even though you never really explained it in detail. I loved the setting you created here, and Kaito was just generally fun to read from Shinichi's POV. You also did an awesome job with writing out their interactions and their banter. I loved reading them talk? Just everything was really well executed, and I'm really glad I found this! Great job and thanks for posting!

This was a really great story, it was so cute and fluffy :3

It's a really good story. I thought it would be a full AU story with the setting of the original Beauty and the Beast story, but I like your idea to use the normal setting with the addition of a belief in magic and witch. It's so fun (and sometimes funny) to read Kaito and Shinichi's growing relationship as days passed during their stay in the house. I thought you would make Kaito almost dead when Shinichi left the house, I don't know how but that's what I think. However, it's Shinichi the one who fainted. Haha, he always pushes himself like that XD Oh, it's a really sweet story. Your writing style is nice.

Keep writing! :)

definitely awesome story.
Remarkable. Really really awesome.
i didn't even notice the tenses.
Distracted by its awesomeness.
Ahh the love.
It's magical.

p.s
you really should write more

p.s.s
that was awesome

Wow, this was adorable! The tenses were a little distracting at first, but then my brain kinda did an auto-correct thing or something. And the last scene was so fluffy! Absolutely loved the dorky boyfriend flirting/banter. Favorite lines, actually. Genius.

Thank you so much for sharing this and brightening my day with it! Keep on writing! :D