Well written and great storyline. You've done well. I think you have done a nice job! Please do more stories if you can! You are on your way to becoming a fantastic author.
I've got a story idea if you write anymore stories. Padme travels to Nal Hutta or Tatooine as a senator on a mission for the Republic. She is captured again, and Anakin is sent to rescue Padme. He succeeds, but latet, he returns to Nal Hutta/Tatooine, enraged, killing men, women, and children too. (I meant the guards, and maybe some guests and dancers. He won't kill
a hutt or the hutt's children.)

Also, this is for all readers and reviewers: I've noticed that reviewers for this story are being harsh and rude to the author and their work. Some reviewers used swear words and other harsh comments. I ask that everyone uses kind words and comments, If you have nothing kind to say, do not comment anything at all. I understand that it is your opinion. but expressing an opinion does not include swearing and being rude to the author. Apologies to the author. (:

Well written, great storyline, and I think you should add more chapters or another story where Padmé has to negotiate with The Hutt Council as a senator. She is captured again and Anakin... well... we know what will happen. He'll be in rage and anger. He'll try to kill the men, women, and children too. (I'm not saying he kills a hutt. Just the guards, and maybe some dancers and guests.) Just a suggestion. Also, people who read and review, stop being mean to the author by swearing and being harsh. If you don't want to comment something nuce, don't comment at all. This is just my opinion. Nice job, author! Make more stories please! (:

garbage and reported bitch

Nice chapter will you please write more chapters love to find out if jabba the hut goes after padma for a second course of fun.

wtf?

This is utterly HORRID. The story makes no sense, and you spelled “lightsaber” wrong. Go die you perverse piece of shit.

I love this story!

More!

Very good story. I hope you decide to write another chapter

Nice little Story. Just one thing a Prostate is something only males have. Otherwise really solide writing.

I thought this was really well-written, and I especially enjoyed the middle part. As a lover of Padmé, I've been searching for quality fan fiction of her in chains, and I finally found one worth reading. Thank-you for writing this.

But why is the picture for the story a naked woman? This can be seen by children too, you know! This is an improvement over "The Royal Slave" but you might want to reconsider moving to a different website, one that is more suited to adult stories like these.

EWW