Does Cybertron have any sort of "anti-fraternization" rules for police or soldiers or such?

*.* This was beautiful. So this is what happened during their little bonding-time. Those two are so cute. Sen's apartment owner will be happy to know that the two of them are together. Maybe a few of Counterforce's law-buddies too. Okay, scratch that- ALL of them will be happy to see him finally falling in love! "About slagging time!" they'll say!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Yes, I know what a thost is. Oh, wait... STAR SABER IS TOTALLY CYCLONUS!

He deserves it. And did you at all model him off of Loki, or did Marvel model Loki off of Liege? I also like the symmetry of Counterforce and Sentenza both having two weapons.

Thank you for reading my comment! I love this story, and I can’t wait to see what’s next!

Wow. Honestly, I can't believe that Part One's been finished... I mean, the ending is perfect (Liege is getting EXACTLY what he deserved, especially for letting Smokescreen's name 'accidentally' slip), but after following this story for what, three years? Four? It's hard to believe we finally reached this point. Major congrats!

I was actually kind of surprised that Joy Ride's crowning achievement wasn't mentioned, but I suppose that, due to the nature of temporal passage and where she was at the time, it might not have happened yet-and either way, it's the kind of escapade that gives people who really shouldn't have them ideas.

Though speaking of the A'almvi... Is it just me, or is their Oath a variation-or should I say, perhaps, amalgamation-of the trigger phrases of the Marauder's Map...?

(I'm also assuming that the twin Relkana mentioned, Wrack and Ruin, are different 'bots than the canon twins by that name?)

I gotta go with Amalgamous on that. Naming a weapon shouldn't always happen. Not because it doesn't sound cool, it very much does, but just because, as IDW comics so aptly put it, all the good names are taken. Eventually, people will have to call their axe "Silver Kill Thing."

Burn in your mess Maximo. Burn in it.

Before my sleep deprived mind made the connection, I thought FoY was a mistype of Froyo. And now I want some.

Wait, Joyride was the first?

Ouch...? Not sure whether I should feel bad for Maximo or not...

I see this chapter come up... an' ahm sniggerin'. X)

And Charity and the rest of the gang got new weapons besides Counterforce, Sen, and Frostbite! Rather like Backdrafts. And Sideswipe becoming an a'almvus- I could just imagine the look on Strongarm's face from the description.

And Optimus got a cute moment with Tumbler! Eeee! And I loved Amalgamos' reaction to Tumbler! It was so cute!

And the end... LOOOOOVED IIIIIT! Never act that innocent ever, Maximo. And Hunt, save a piece for the readers, they hate him right now too! *pulls out massive sword and strokes edge lovingly with an evil glance towards Maximo*

Wow. Words cannot describe the masterpiece you have created. The blending with the episodes is seamless, the characters are deep, and you have made RiD Season 1 much more bearable.

'Til all are one
P.S. Sentenza could really benefit from a couple sessions with Rung from MTMTE

…looks like the plan didn't pay off for whomever sent Sentenza. It doesn't sound like it could've been Unicron, but I can't think of anyone else whom it could've been. And while I haven't read it, Counterforce being the Counterforce to Sen's darker half reminds of that Marvel duo, Cloak and Dagger.

Wow. Only five chapters in, and this is already amazing.

Oy... talk about revelations!

Oh Amalgamous you troll.

Oh was it Megatronus? You know even though Vector can manipulate time, I still Onyx will get there first.