This is a different kind of story. There is some strange stuff (a self-impregnated Neville, for one). It works really well the first half but feels rushed the second. On balance it is worth the read.

Wow, incredible story.
I do wish that it had continued, but I'm guessing your muse left you for this story.
Here's hoping to read more stories by you in the future.

Now I remember why I stopped reading this. Daphne literally decides every aspect of their relationship. No matter how hypocritical or idiotic. Harry just stands there like a meek little bitch saying "yes dear", "sorry dear". I certainly hope this isn't how you expect relationships to be in real life.

I like how you've developed Daphne's character. She's a lot of fun! I also like the interactions between Harry and Daphne and Tracy and Neville. You've got a very good story going on here.

That was just evil... ;-) Great job!

This is a very well thought out and enjoyable story! Great job! I hope you will complete it one day.

In one word u potray daphne as ice and the same time u show her as slut who used her sex to her advantage lol atleast think what are you trying to convey here daphne looks more like a slut than any ice queen

It looks like this story has been moved to AO3. Also looks like he changed the plot around chapter 26. Might want to read it there.

Is it DEAD?
I hope not...
This story is just to good to leave incomplete!

As I said before I like your writing. The only problem I had with this chapter was the way that Daphne was able to get everyone to help her conspire to hide areas present and Harry was not suspicious about her and the way her mother and Aunt were talking in the corner. I thought he should have been able to figure out that she had gotten him an extra present and gotten one of his own.

Okay, first I like the story. Now the only real problem I had with your story in this chapter was the way that Hermione scolded Harry about his reaction to that time of the month for a woman. Especially since Hermione knows all about his home life, and with know that his on Uncle and Cousin would not allow him to learn about biology. I just think you could have written that better but so far your story is doing okay.

Seems I was a bit hasty, you addressed the legal aspects fairly well here. So disregard my comment.

I'm confused, Astoria just murdered someone and they are talking about expelling her and not prison time? It's not like cannon where Draco was at least smart enough to have deniability. Astoria delivered the poison and said it was from her.

I hope that you will continue with this story soon. It's great.

ok more please