Reviews for Safe Haven |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a truly beautiful ending! I love the happy little family and that Charlie and Bass were going to fight for Miles. You wrote a beautiful story - B |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopper sounds gorgeous! And I loved that picture of Bass seeing him with Charlie for the very first time... A sweet ending to a great story, and I know that Charlie, Bass and Hopper will shake some sense into Miles... Anyway, thank you! I really loved this whole story! :) cheers, Mags |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am such a sucker for a ooey gooey happy wnding when it comes to Charloe. The baby name was hilarious OMG! You know that Miles doesn't stand a chance against Bass and Charlie, but then you add in their gorgeous little son, and really he is so never winning that battle. He'll be home in no time. Thank you for such a wonderful story and for a perfect ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH! You updated! And what a wonderful update you shared with us! I love the twist of Charlie being the one who becomes so emotional and says she can survive loosing Bass. I felt the selfishness of Rachel rang true and the reaction that Charlie was afraid to be a mother was perfect - plus Bass' reaction/support was so well written. - B |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Hayj, it's so good to see more of this great story! Tension plus as Bass rides off... Poor Charlie, I can't imagine how that would feel... Can't wait to find out how this goes :) Mags |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it...definitely worth the wait. How can Charlie morn someone who betrayed her so many times, but ahe will be an awesome mom. I liked how Gene helped her out with the Ranger when she asked for a horse. I just wish Bass didn't have to leave Charlie and miss their baby being born. He is going to worry about her the whole time with all the fainting, and she will worry about him. Let's hope they get their happy ending. Another great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you switch lines between Miles and Charlie and Charlie and Bass. I really look forward to an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am really enjoying this story and loved these last few updates! I particularly love when Charlie told Rachel that she was a Monroe! And I feel like Rachel's behavior was so aligned to character that I loved it when Charlie just ordered her men to keep her under watch. Bass and Miles' fear for Charlie and the baby was so well written - I can't wait for more! thanks for a fun read - B |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Really enjoyed this update! love take charge Charlie and protective Bass.. :) more soon? Xx Magpie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that Charlie took out the cadet, and that she put Rachel in her place. Also love the fact that Charlie led the raid on the training camp that was awesome. Bass isn't the only one that had a heart attack when Charlie fainted, but at least she is ok, but I am amazed that Bass was able to keep himself from killing Rachel when she slapped Charlie. I absolutely love this story. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok first I am super excited you updated this story! I love the detail with which you tell stories as it makes visualizing so much easier and Bass' protectiveness was so perfect. Thank you for continuing to write this story and I look forward to reading the reaction when Miles and Rachel learn about the baby. - B |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay ! I have missed this story so much...I'm glad that Charlie has someone with some medical training to help take care of her, and the baby. I was wondering how long it would take before someone saw the marks on her back. I'm curious how you will handle the kids because Bass and Charlie definitely have a lot to fight for. So happy you updated please update again soon :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't care how short it is. I always love updates. Great chapter. :) -Lemon |
![]() ![]() Yay! Charlie baby on the way! Loving this story! X |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this chapter - you did such an amazing job communicating Bass' fear and anger, as well as his incredible love and protectiveness for Charlie. I could completely visualize him killing Duncan for having Charlie whipped, and being so very scared for their baby. I am so excited to see where this goes next. - B |