This is really well written to show what went unsaid, nice job!

There isn't an episode on tomorrow about Gordon you're probably talking about the very first episode when he gets trapped because the next episode is called skyhook and it's about John.

I love all the fanfictions the look deeper into the characters thoughts during the episodes. Beautifully written and I look forward to more :)

I did like this! I love it when people take an episode and look behind it to what is unseen and unsaid! Really well done.

Wow, you're fast! But you're a bare-bones writer, concise and succinct and all those other words that make it sound like I know what I'm talking about.

Slingshot was a GREAT eppy and we got to see John come home to the island. How awesome was that? Except he was worried for 'Rocket Boy' and Kayo, and out of Thunderbird 5 he looked small and frightened.

Kayo needs proper credit for reining in Alan's impulsiveness, but once he knew she had faith in him, his genius began to shine. Alan will always be a cocky brat in any incarnation of Thunderbirds, but at least in TBAG 2015, he has a streak of humility that stops him being TOO annoying. My favourite line was from Scott- "Alan Tracy crazy, or 'should I be worried' crazy?"

The last line of this chapter says it all. Alan got a reality check that he sorely needed.

Looking forward to more, and putting you on all my alerts. (So there.)