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   hunzbookwyrm chapter 1 . 8/13/2019 Great story, hope to see more from you soon. |
| Rebmul chapter 1 . 7/15/2019 id love to see ginny's response to all this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/11/2018 This was a very enjoyable little "missing scene" story- the premise wasn't outlandish, and the sex sequences were pretty hot. Just about all that could be expected was included- breast play (though there could always be more), fellatio with swallowing and a little sharing, multiple-position intercourse with the cock licked clean after, and one of the East Indian twins paying some incestuous attention to her reluctant sister. Some readers may have hoped for anal, but I'm not that much of a fan of it. I do wish you had given a description, preferably detailed, of Padma and Parvati- their long black hair, big brown eyes, the darkness of their areolæ, how their deep mocha skin contrasted with Harry's paleness, and whether their armpits and crotches were shaved or natural (I definitely prefer the latter). I like that you gave the twins distinct personalities, with brave Gryffindor Parvati being the instigator and more adventurous than rational Ravenclaw Padma. I'm actually now interested in seeing some of your other stories portraying Harry with Cho Chang or Molly Weasley. Thank you, and Good Luck with continuing to develop as a writer. -EbnyLvrBryan, via mobile phone. |
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 1 . 1/20/2018 A very hot one-shot here! |
| DontMindMe chapter 1 . 10/16/2017 Lucky Harry |
| moops chapter 1 . 6/19/2017 hes famous he should have had girls always lusting him all the time . so this makes perfect sence. |
| BBWulf chapter 1 . 3/23/2016 Twins FTW! |
| Tellemicus Sundance chapter 1 . 1/12/2016 ...If only something awesome like this could've happened in canon. I always felt that Parvati and Padma should've gotten bigger roles than they did and Harry's relationship with Ginny came out of left field because there was next to no buildup for it, unlike his long-standing crush with Cho. Great work and I hope you can somehow work an actual story out of this lemon! |
| Matt Bauer chapter 1 . 12/9/2015 So good. This really affected me! |
| draco122 chapter 1 . 10/22/2015 that was great i really enjoyed reading that one Draco122 |
| toile grant chapter 1 . 8/12/2015 very good |
| Dragoon Galaxy chapter 1 . 7/26/2015 your English is just fine from what I'd read |
| magitech chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 Nicely written story Harry should be thinking Ginny Who right about now :) |
| ReadsWayTooMuch chapter 1 . 5/24/2015 more please! maybe where Ginny finds out about all this ;) |
| Slytherin66 chapter 1 . 5/24/2015 A very nice story and I love the rare pairing. |
