come on please update this story

sigh... well, this generally had potential. The spelling was truly terrible, and this chapter was so incredibly slow-building, it was painful. There was no need for a pov for every faction at every revelation, that was annoying.

Too bad you never worked on it more, in the hopes your writing would improve,

Espero el siguiente capitulo con ansías

Rias certainly is a presumptuous bimbo, isn't she. To assume that she'll be married into House Lucifer is unbelievably arrogant. Someone who has another person to conveniently step in to fight her battle, one which she would've certainly lost, doesn't deserve to lick Naruto's foot, much less have delusions of grandeur.

Hopefully Naruto will cuckold the male Gremories by seducing Grayfia Lucifuge and Venelana Bael.

Aside from Moka, Naruto's peerage composition is completely uninspired.

Please continue

Please continue

super

queen i mean esdeth or who hehehe

cant wait till the next chapter

Valla que forma de dejarnos en suspenso me gustaría que pudieras subir el siguiente capítulo ya que dejaste a muchos con la curiosidad que pasara más adelante ya que en una gran historia la que está haciendo te agradezco de antemano por el siguiente capítulo

You are kinda gay

cliffhangers are fucking gay

Please update

i can't believe how good this story i just hope you will start writing it again as it was a very good read and a story that i would love to read more about so keep it up and thanks

So i believe its safe to say that your all of your's story's are dead right ?