Selwyn is related to Tom

rewriting it might be better cause if you force yourself to finish it, it might just not fit what happened in the earlier parts

update please

When is the next chapter?

Please continue in some way! I would like to find out what happens!

Revamp the story

I saw you rewrite it. It will be even more interesting to see all mistakes corrected and if you start with the first chapter and then make a poll you can see if your readers like it with the rewrite too.

If you dont know where its going, working that out and start from scratch. I really like it though

Don’t force yourself to continue. If you feel it needs a rewrite do it. It’s your story. Follow you heart and gut.

If you have to force yourself to continue then you know you need a revamp because as you said this story started on your off phase so do a revamp but leave this one here so others don't get confused about remembering this story but not finding it just write as next chapter for this you are rewriting this story and if you changed the story name just say its name is the rewrite.
I kind of liked it but your depressed harry version is a kind of person who would have to be medicated in the muggle world.

Do what you think is best.

Revamp it if you don't feel good about it then you shoudn't continue.

I think you should continue it! By rewriting or continuing it's up to your motivation i think! If you think you can develop Evanna's character like you want her to be (like a child personality development really xD) then go for it! :) Don't be discouraged by lack of inspiration now! If you start writing, you'll get to new ideas, characters, plots and so on... and that is truly inspiring! It's an amazing idea, very original and with a realistic plot (not like many of the stories here in this site!).

first I would like to hope to think you are no longer depressed and you are taking care of yourself, now about the story it truly depends on yourself you yourself said it made you cring, you should feel comfortable with your own storys and make them your own. If you feel the need to rewrite it then feel free to I know most reads will support you and those that don't are spitful of your amazing writing. So you do you and we will support you through it.

Its your story darlin make it as you want it to be made. Have fun with it okay? I'd love to re read it all again if you decide to re write it