plz tell me Nico isn't the muggleborn. I would cry if he died. I cried already, but I would cry some more...
also, THIS IS PURE GOLD!

I’m crying man why you gotta do this to me? I love this story and I can’t wait to read any more of yours :D

My heart is bleeding. This story gave me full body goosebumps.

AWWWWW That's so sweet and sad

Oh my god!
That was a piece of art!
Loved it!

Oh mi gods, Nico!
I love your story I read this like 50 time already and I still love the ending each time (well I love all of it) you are really talented.

Omg, that was so good. I absolutely loved so so so so so so so so so so so so so so much!

Right from the start, this was a roller coaster. As you progress from a light and happy childhood, to the struggles of a teenager turning into a young and mature woman, you write the scenes perfectly so the person reading gets the point. It is a thoughtful and creative piece of art, and how you managed 20k is beyond me.

There is that bittersweet and nolstagic tone left the reader with a sense of foreboding, and- gah! I can't put this into words. Even though there are a few grammatical errors(everyone has them), it doesn't distract me from the story. If I had to describe this in 2 words, it would be sentimental and wistful.

-Guest

THIS IS GOOD STUFF! GOOD JOB..

Y U NO HAPPY ENDING!
But seriously this was a really REALLY good story.
And such a bittersweet ending too! Now I feel empty inside *sniff*
Would you recomment any good percy Jackson Harry potter crossover to heal my empty soul? I can't seem to find any that aren't like NOPE NOT READING THIS! at some point
And when I say 'nope not reading this' I mean stories that make Nico (or other caracters) angst ridden depressive and/or self hating teenagers or really OOC in other ways.
Oh and puplic/semi puplic gay shaming(is that a even a word? It is now ;) I don't really like that either. *wishpers* I hate it~

Anyway thank's for the read it was really good.
Have a nice day ;)

I'M NOT CRYING, DAMMIT!

This was a hell of a ride from start to finish, and I absolutely loved how you wrote everybody. Thank you so much for the read! *goes to buy a tonne of tissues*

Aww how cute :)

I loved your story! I almost cried...it was just amazingly touching. It was so sad... *sniff*

The feelz I cry

First of all, good work on completing a 20k word fic, this is really impressive.
Overall, it flowed very well. Reading this felt like running through a timeline of Lily's life, which is a style I personally love. The detail put into each scene gives her life and all the characters warmth and character. Each scene is also spaced apart nicely, the feeling of time passing and Lily maturing is very much there. I especially love how scenes connect with each other, like the continuating influence of the bomber jacket- those details mean a lot to your story, they really bring it all together. You also do a great job of setting the atmosphere for each scene. My favorites are the last few scenes, after the memory wipe. The way you captured the feelings of nostalgia and wistfulness are amazing. Every scene after a timeskip reveals a lot about what's implied to have happened in the meantime, and every scene is impactful. I really liked the part with Piper at the wedding, it showed a lot of depth to the aftermath of the entire debacle.
However, while the pacing of the story was overall great, I felt the flow of your writing was sometimes broken. Too many parentheses distracts and detracts from the smooth progression of the scene. There were also a few minor grammatical issues, and the occasional misplaced capitalization.
On a final note, the ending was fantastic. The timeline and implications you left with the final scene were satisfying in kind of a sad way.
Keep up the great work!