| Reviews for What The Heart Wants |
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  Lynny chapter 9 . 5/28/2019 I so wish thuss had more chapters irs brilliant |
 wrprincess chapter 9 . 1/27/2018 This is really good, the way you have written the characters is amazing. Can't wait for more, please update soon :) |
| coultharddd chapter 9 . 1/15/2017 Just read all of this! Its fab love your writing love the idea of Alia and Rachel I CANT WAIT FOR REDDIE! |
| becstaarrrr chapter 8 . 4/16/2016 I mean I hate to be the one to ask, but will there be any chance of this being continued? Please? Pretty please with a cherry on top? I have many reasons as to why you should: 1) you write really well 2) I loooooove Alia - she's a great addition to Rachels story. She s a really strong character and I think you've framed her brilliantly within the story. 3) we need to take down the evil that is Rachels mother - she is not a nice lady and we can't leave Rachel without having her revenge. 4) I want to know how Alia gets on at school - when and how are her secrets going to come out and how will everyone take it?! Especially when people find out she's Rachels daughter! 5) WE NEEEEEDDD REDDIE. Plz and thank you. I'm fed up of Melissa! Alia was right - Eddie was stupid. I'm really excited to see how Alia gets the documents and they all sort this out! I just need to know what happens so much. It makes me really sad that it's been 6 months since you last updated. Please could you find it in your heart to relieve me of the Unknown?! I really would love you so very much of you carried on. Your writing style is on point. Beccy |
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/16/2016 Please please please continue! |
| please continue chapter 1 . 12/9/2015 Please continue |
| Becca chapter 8 . 12/4/2015 Hi, I am literally in love with this story and your writing skills are great! I have to applaud you on your amazing characterisation of Alia. I've read lots of stories in which I just haven't been able to connect with Rachel's daughter and your story is one of three in which I am able to do so. I also really like the storyline as you've made it so realistic which is great when reading it. I cannot wait to read more of this story so please update again soon when you have time. Lots of love, Becca x |
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/10/2015 Please update |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/8/2015 Reread chapter 8 again today. I absolutely love it and I really can't wait for the Reddie in chapter 9. I'm scared though for how Eddie will react whenn he finds out about Ali. Please update again soon :) |
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/8/2015 As always, I loved this chapter! I love the way you write and your characterisation. Please update again soon, I can't wait to read the next chapter x |
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/14/2015 Great update! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 10/3/2015 Please update again soon |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/27/2015 Love this so much, especially everyone's reaction to Mel's mum. Please update again soon and I can't wait to read the next part when the email alert comes in haha x |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/26/2015 Omigosh, I've missed this so much so decided to reread this chapter again. Please update again soon because I absolutely love it and I really miss it |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/20/2015 Please post more soon - this is really good! |
