| Reviews for The Fire Within |
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  Gary is an Assho chapter 9 . 7/12 "It's Pinky, it's Pinky and the Brain!" Man, that was one of my all time favorite animaniacs show! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/12 I really like betrayal fics and the way that you show them the other fics was really funny. keep up the good work! ;) |
| AMotherWhoCares chapter 17 . 7/9 Look FanficFan920, I understand you don't want to be bothered... But me, and my ex-husband just want to see what messages you sent both of us before you blocked us both! We cant get them via email since the FanFiction PM Email notifications don't work anymore! You don't understand...we cant see them via email and our only way is by unblocked PM boxes. I had work, so I couldn't check my messages until I woke up this morning! I saw that I had a message from you, but you blocked me so I COULD NOT read this message! Please, temporarily unblock either me or my husband so one of us can see what you sent us in a message! My son wants to know what he did wrong! Please, let us see the messages and we PROMISE to leave you along and never message you ever again. Sincerely, AMotherWhoCares |
| AMotherWhoCares chapter 1 . 7/9 Look FanficFan920, I understand you don't want to be bothered, But me, and my ex-husband just want to see what messages you sent both of us before you blocked us both! We cant get them via email since the FanFiction PM Email notifications don't work anymore! You don't understand...we cant see them via email and our only way is by unblocked PM boxes. I had work, so I couldn't check my messages until I woke up this morning! I saw that I had a message from you, but you blocked me so I COULD NOT read this message! Please, temporarily unblock either me or my husband so one of us can see what you sent us in a message! My son wants to know what he did wrong! Please, let us see the messages and we PROMISE to leave you along and never message you ever again. Sincerely, AMotherWhoCares |
| ImportantMessage chapter 1 . 6/30 Hey, its FatherofAWriter again! I know you probably want me to stay away, and I understand if I do. But it's just that you blocked me before I can even see the recent message you sent me 2 days ago, and I REALLY want to see what it says! Can you PLEASE unblock me temporarily so I can read the message. I'll make me happy knowing what the message says. Please FanFicfan920, don't ignore this message... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/30 Hey, this is FatherofAWriter, I know you probably want me to stay away, and I understand if I do. But it's just that you blocked me before I can even see the recent message you sent me 2 days ago, and I REALLY want to see what it says! Can you PLEASE unblock me temporarily so I can read the message. I'll make me happy knowing what the message says. Please FanFicfan920, don't ignore this message... |
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/13 Please update this a after you have not been on it in the future please because it is a great story |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/9 So grenija is a traitor |
| The Commentator chapter 2 . 1/26 Ch 2 Report How the Heliolisk did those real world fanfics appear on the PokéInternet?! This is totally Tamato berries! |
 CinnakinCat chapter 1 . 1/14 I vote Bonnie and Max catch Squishy and Jirachi, respectively. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/10 mate you spelt capisce wrong, not a flame, its italian |
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/22/2019 Bulbasaur use fan fiction to know about Ash's betrayal? Man this is creepy and don't make sense. They know that they are in a fan fiction just like other fan fiction written by some obsessed fans ? (no offence) this is a 4th wall break inside 4th wall break, even pinkie pie never did that. Something say this is going to be the weirdest ash betrayed fan fiction I ever going to read. |
| Flamethrower chapter 1 . 12/22/2019 There is noting special in this story , ash betrayed by his best friends, then how they became Ash's best friends in the first place? When they introduced themselves I feel no emotion at all. Like the terminator. |
| Megatronus666 chapter 5 . 10/9/2019 Mermaid Man:Eeeeeeevvvvvviiiiiiiilllll! |
| charmanderpika chapter 9 . 9/28/2019 nice movie trailer type thing |
