This is a great story but man... it's an information download :D I do forward to the next chapter, though :) Keep up the great work!

Sincerely,
Cyres

This is good! Update please i want to read more! :D

As interesting as this is, I can see some room for improvement. I felt it went a little fast, in the plot and dialogue, there was almost Full-Disclosure on the part of Danny's adopted people. And honestly, I didn't read much surprise in SG-1 finding out that Lord Daniel and Danny their intermediate guide were one and the same...
I know that the populace of the planet share information via 'The Link' but there was no 'back-story' to lend to the other view, that of Danny's adoptive people or even Danny's view itself...
All-in-all this is an intriguing story-line, but I think it needs to be drawn out more.

This story is good, it just needs to have the grammar and spelling checked. Hopefully you release the next chapter so I can continue to read this story.

Not much about Danny. DX But it is still good read. Don't know much about Stargate so it a bit of a struggle to follow along.

This is an interesting story. Cannot wait for the next chapter.

Short but still interesting. Can't wait for their reactions. XD

Interesting so far. A lot of tech babble that went right over my head though. -sweatdrop-

great story hope you keep it up