It's at this point that I would make "Tori died" an alternate ending...but that's just me. I usually dont like the more comedic take on these stories but this ones actually entertaining me.

Rather than bemoan the dream sequence resolution (which worked here), I'll go along with premonition. Nifty epilogue too.

I gotta say, nice twist with Jade's nightmare/premonition. I see it as both.

Robbie is not going to survive, is he? Especially since the 'suits' keep the animatronic skeleton as suit mode. And either Robbie won't fasten it properly, or an 'accident' will occur.

As for the fire, why did Jade leave her scissors? Even if the fire burned any evidence of them being hers, anyone who knows Jade that sees the scissors on the news, who know Tori was supposed to work there, will get suspicious.

Anyway, nice chapter, and the nightmare/premonition twist was much appreciated, especially since Tori and Jade very much lived.

Looking forward to more of your works.

Hey I'm here because I used to read a story about Tori and Jade and I want to go re-read it again but I don't know the name. I remember that you used to comment on it so that's why I'm contacting you. The storys plot had Tori being raped. And then tori and jade adopted kids and the girl they adopted like Cat and robbies kid.

Darkness falls...for now.

Damn. I have to admit, and I'm kinda sorry for it, but I do hate you for not only killing Tori, but making it seem as if Jade is dead too. I hope neither are the case, but it does look a little close to it at the moment, which I'm guessing was your intent.

Thanks for the shout out. It was kinda funny on our part, accidental too, that I read this shortly after uploading the new chapter to 'Jaded Nightmare'.

Nice surprise with Golden Freddy, and I like the twist that the hat he gave her made Freddy and Bonnie think she was a friend. I do wonder about why Golden Freddy did it, but I'm guessing it had something to do with the message on the poster after he faded away. Did he see her as the girl in the poster or something?

And yes, I still find it funny how Chica is hiding from Jade. Can't blame her. Or him. I have no idea what gender the animatronics are supposed to be. I do have to ask. Will Chick make a return, or is she/he not going go get involved anymore?

Looking forward to the next chapter. Unless Tori and Jade did die. In which case, I'll still read it, but I'm not looking forward to it as much.

Godamnit! What Freaking Happens?!

First comment, ignore the "reviewer" who dissed this story & complained about the machines being evil. From everything I've read about the game, they are evil, deadly killers.

I like Jade's attack & counter attack. She needs to stop the bloodflow before she takes on the others though.

Not sure if Chica should get a pass. It's as nasty as the others, just with less backbone.

It was easy to picture Chica with her beak open. I saw her as one of those cartoon moments, jaw open, eyes wide with one twitching, as she crawled away.

One down, two to go. *crosses 'Foxy' of the list, puts a question mark beside 'Chica'* Hope Jade is able to save Tori before too much blood loss.

I like how you put the animatronics' conversation. And, I have to admit, I like Chica's insistence that Tori's hers. I'm sure Jade thinks the same thing, just not in the same way.

And again, the guys a douche who clearly didn't read the summary. Seriously, it's the first part after the 'by Invader Johnny' part for crying out loud. Rex could notice it, and he technically can't see.

Looking forward to the next. *secretly sharpens Jade's scissors. The one in her boot, not her bra. Only Tori's allowed there, and I have no intention of looking like Foxy*

DOOD THIS IS AWESOME KEEPIT UP! XXDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

First off, thank you for not killing Tori and for updating. Second, how the helium did Jade "borrowed" a gun from David, a police officer? Anyway, update more and soon. Thanks and ciao

I am glad this is the way Tori's fate went. Although if Tori had died, Jade, over-the-top in her rage, would be cool to see.

I like the last minute change. Though it'd make Jade go psycho, not that she isn't already, and destroy the animatronics, this way is better.

I hope we don't see the golden Freddy. That bastard is more trouble than regular Freddy.

Though kinda random, I like how Tori called Chica 'Birdie'. That was kinda funny to me.

Looking forward to Jade killing the animatronics. And explaining to Tori's dad about the gun.

If you dare hurt any of the animatronics, I will kick your ass.

I hope he updates soon. It's funny ass hell