Holy cow, that was good. *fans self* I do so love me a dominant Cloud. And the end, aww.

Wow, that was hotsweet

Oh, wow, this was so incredible! And so hottttt. God darn it, if I were a window, I'd be covered with steam!

hot but also sweet. thanks for sharing the story

I literally just woke up, checked my email, saw this and immediately started reading it. Best damn wake up call ever. I know the idea was based on a prompt but interesting use of Mako... Never seen that one before, but if it's written like this then I can roll with it. Any day of the week.

And, oh my god, do I ever miss the Strifehart Kinkmeme. Good times.