You write pretty well but I honestly find it hard to enjoy the story. This Naruto is just so... unlikable.

I understand the need to have some sort of balance in the story and to be honest, my issue really has nothing to do with how the power levels are set-up but more with how the characters (or Naruto) is set-up.

He is soft. I don't feel his strength. He is in a new world but he folds instead of finding another way to meet his objectives and keep true to his convictions. Given what's at stake and what just happened, finding his way home should be the most important thing in his mind.

Poor Naruto, he just CAN'T catch a break. First he finds his own promise is used against him to make him behave, unknowing of how hard a decision that was for Ellen and causing her some sleepless nights. Then his audience with the king as she gives her report causes him to be tested by Mila who doesn't seem him as someone able to equal their power.

If only the poor ignorant girl knew...

Naruto was wise to slip out using Lim as a distraction between Ellen's and Mila's argument. If it was me, I'd consider that SWEET payback for sticking a sword in my mouth to wake me up. Speaking so being wise, Naruto has proven his craftiness by lifting the men's wallets and making them both unknowingly pay for the damage that was done.

Before Sofy decided to spend some time with Naruto one on one, most likely checking what kind of person he is and if he'll prove a problem for Ellen no doubt. She's cunning like that, using her peaceful angel like looks, along with her alluring beauty, to make people lower their guard around her and get caught in whatever pace she sets.

Poor Naruto even had the blessing and misfortune bite him in the ass hard as he accidentally sneaked into Mila bathing. Unable to think properly or stop himself from staring as she eventually rinsed away the suds blinding her. If only he was able to think, he would've used a sexy jutsu to look like a naked Ellen to pretend she just got into the room, expecting a bath to be available and calmly walk out like she was disappointed that Mila was there first.

It would be PERFECT! Mila wouldn't suspect a thing and only feel annoyed at most from seeing her rival had somehow gotten in the same bathing room as she was in. NOW he has to deal with her seriously trying to kill him tomorrow, but he has ONE important thing on his side.

He now has knowledge that she has ice powers and using them she can freeze the floor, so he needs to remember to watch his step as he fights her.

Poor Naruto, he's finding out the hard way just how mischievous Ellen is as he reluctantly agrees to work for her under his two conditions with no alternatives.

Stating how he's worth it and truth be told, she has no idea how much a steal she got right there...

Regardless Naruto seems to be getting along with the rest of his new comrades as expected. Sorry too many names makes it hard to think and remember all at once. Only key people are easy to remember. Like Lim for instance, reminds me of those stick up their ass professional types on the outside. The inside is hard to call as not everyone is the same, but considering she's easy to tease, she might be a softy to those close to her... When she isn't angered that is.

Titta is glad to know why Naruto would stay behind and work with Ellen for their sake when he could've run. Smart, yeah, but it wouldn't be right to leave them high and dry like that after nursing him to health. Debts of such kindness should be repaid as soon as possible.

It's good to see Naruto and Ellen easily dealt with the Zion's army and their dragons thanks to their wind based techniques. Good to see Arifar was willing to lend Naruto it's aid to destroy that dragon too! Seems he's got a new voice in his head to help him now!

So Naruto landed in Alsace after defeating Madara and heal up in time to protect Titta from what would've ended in her being raped and killed during the invasion without Tigre there to save her. Shame he died a few summers ago, but I assume it's part of the grand scheme here.

Understandable she and Bertrand would find it hard to believe Naruto could do anything to save them at first, thinking him a reckless youth about to throw away the life they saved. Only to find now that he is FAR more than they assumed.

It's very understandable that compared to the Great Ninja war he took part in and helped stop, thanks to Kakashi helping him to kill Madara, that Naruto would easily be able to defeat those knights. Their heavy armor and lack of ninja training from his homeworld making them...well... I guess I can only say it bluntly.

Slower, weaker, and far less durable even with their armor. Not to mention their sense might be duller too as ninjas have a damn good sixth sense for danger in the Elemental Nations.

Which brings us to Eleonora, it seems with Tigre not there to capture her interest. She will have her undivided attention on our unpredictable knucklehead ninja turned war hero. Good luck, Naruto~ She'll make damn sure your life is never boring again!

Continue?

Use Kate Bunshin of 20 clones to attack Ludmilla. Use also regular Rasengan and Substitution Jutsu also.

Great fic

trash fic

This is a rare crossover...follows cannon sort of and is entertaining..more plz

Oh boy, I cant wait to see the reactions of the kingdom especially Ellen and the other vanadis when they see his modes. Not to mention that MAYBE both combine (senjutsu influence:Kurama mode) could possibly destroy the whole kingdom. I can literally and

*POSSIBLE SPOILERS* (only the ones who read the novel or wiki) "religiously" see how they react though, that only depends on you the author.
Ps. Sorry for my bad grammar english is not my main language.

Hmmm, interesting turn of events. I look forward to see how this unfolds in future chapters. You did a good job.

Nice chapter. I liked it and loved the interplay that took place. Is this going to be a Harem story? If so, then it would be interesting. If not, then still be interesting. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

LMFAO, that was one hell of a chapter that you go here. Even the ending where Ellen decided that she was in love with Naruto in just a few interactions with the blond.

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Aw, did you just kill Tigre off? That's not cool, man. Really not cool. :(

Though, at least Naruto was still able to make things more lively. I still believe that you should keep Tigre around. He and Naruto will make quite a dynamic duo with all girls left and right attracted to them. XD