I wish I could be as good at writing as you.

AWWWWW CUTEE

These stories were just what I was looking for! you write so well and I love your interpretations of the characters. Thank you so much for these!

This was such a sweet story and leaves us with hope! It fits well with your other great oneshots! Thank you!

CUTEST PROPOSAL EVER OMFG

UM...OUCH?!
You're so talented!

This was so adorable. I loved every word, and it was nicely written as well. Mi noche buena si termino buena lol.

I forgot how much I love your writing. I'm so glad to be back and reading again! Thanks for all that you do, Nat!

I'm catching up on your stuff! Slowly but surely! Anyways, I thought it was really quite clever how you interspersed description with the dialogue between Eren and Mikasa. I think this is one of those pieces that could've so easily gotten description heavy, but because you made the choice to include the dialogue (I also especially liked how Mikasa speaks about her lack of belonging with the girls and how that contrasts to Eren's full acceptance of her) this turned out so nicely.

Part two... PART TWOOOOO...please?

Oh. my. god. So I started reading this because I'm procrastinating from homework, and I'VE NEVER BEEN SO HAPPY TO PROCRASTINATE. This was absolutel g, Nat. Like if there's one thing I had to rant and rave about, it'd be the pacing. The pacing of the story, the way you utilized the rain, and syntax to set the mood and speed was so artful. I'm so blown away. Also, if anyone ever argues that consent can't be made sexy, I will direct them to this little piece right here, because holy hell, that was overwhelmingly hot. Now I'm too sexually frustrated to continue my homework, and it's basically all your fault.

Oh my gosh natiwati! This was just beautiful you do mikasa and Eren so perfectly. Why aren't they canon yet?! I really enjoyed this one shot, it just hit me with a pang to my heart, why can't they be happy? ;-; but beautiful as always with your writing! Continue to do more soon!

Omg this was just to much I was nearly crying! How are you such an amazing writer I loved it! Continue to do awesomely!:3

Nice Chapter, Eren really put his foot in his mouth this time.

I actually have a request, if you don't mind. It feature's my OC Divine; you'll know who he is in a minute. Pairings: ErenxMikasa, Slight DivinexKrista

It's basically where Mikasa is approached by both Jean and Ymir who tell her that Eren's cheating on her with Krista. She doesn't believe it until they show picture proof. But when they confront Eren it turns out to be a huge misunderstanding. With an unexpected explanation.

Here's the Backstory: Mikasa didn't believe it when Jean and Ymir told her that Eren is cheating on her, especially with Krista. She knew full well why; Ymir was probably still upset that Krista broke up with her months ago (Even though it was her own fault for shacking up with another girl behind the poor blonde's back.) And Jean... Jean's always been jealous of Eren being together with her, plain and simple. Not to mention another reason, was that Eren had an older brother/younger sister kind of relationship with Krista, since they were little. She was ready to dismiss the whole thing, until they brought out their trump and show a picture of Eren hugging a giggling Krista, kissing her on the cheek.

Ymir's pissed, Jean's smug, and Mikasa's bothered.

When confronted, Eren denies any accusation towards. Mainly out of confusion, considering he doesn't recall ever spending time with Krista recently. When showed the picture; he's shocked before he realizes what going on. He decides to settle this whole matter and decides rather than explain, he'll show it to them after school at the park. When they arrived, they learn the true reason behind what they saw in the photo. Divine Jeager; Eren's younger twin brother, and Krista's childhood friend/new boyfriend. Divine had been traveling with Eren's godmother (My AU) and had just recently came to live with him. And has had a bit of a crush on Krista since they were young.

Sorry for the long review but I like to be detailed. I hope to hear your reply soon. Thanks.

It's so damn cute! It almost makes me sick how adorable you write them. You're incredible!