This was adorable! You did an amazing job and if there were any typos than they certainly weren't obvious. I loved this little story. :)

WAH THIS IS AMAZING

xD I think it was great!

This is my favorite fan fiction all time.
Those baaad puns are amazing.

Thanks !

***Pyrane***

This is an awesome story! Loved it! :DDDDD

Ahh The lamb of dream ~~
Do cuteee
this gives me a lot of smiles
thank you

interesting

Nice one shot! Interesting take on what happens after the whole Master of Death shenanigans.

Death talking in all caps reminds me of Death from the Diskworld series.

lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I love this what if story and hope to see more of your work in the future !

The Crimson Mage.

I absolutely loved this. I think this is my favourite story I've read so far on this website _ I know this might sound a little strange, but I felt a little...grateful (?) I don't know, but I feel kind of grateful for you adding the bit about sleep paralysis. Normally people would over-exaggerate or under-exaggerate the whole ordeal, but you captured the stages of sleep paralysis quite well. Wow, this is very off topic now. Anyway, great oneshot, definitely adding it to my 'Favourites' :)

I like your story
I feel like Harry didn't have any luck and frankly, if i were im, i'll be a bitch with fate (because his fate sucked a lot...).
So Harry was t be the champion of death but couldn't be. interesting...

...he conquered hell?! How badass!

Well I really liked this! It surprisingly got pretty deep/spiritual halfway though. Still, the idea of Tom Riddle, Slytherin extraordinaire, with a cute widdle lamb is hilarious!

Oh my gosh! Thanks so much for uploading another story! I love your writing and as always you stories leave a happy smile on my face.