Reviews for invitation |
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![]() ![]() This is my new favorite thing in the whole world. I'm dying woah |
![]() ![]() BLESSSSSSSSSSSZZ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Never resist her invitation never kai. Love it |
![]() ![]() words cannot describe how much i wish this actually happened. You're good at capturing their chemistry and fiery tension. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so twisted but so sexy at the same time. You have Kai's character down, the grandpa dracula line was everything! Lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() "this is romance" haha only in the world of Bonkai |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well shit. I need round two and a cold shower...;) XO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will there be a part two where Kai comes back for round 2? ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nngh, that was hot. Really short, but hot. I like the way you didn't use capitals this time, it kind of feels right for this short. Awesome job again, mah bb |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was crazy hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() so so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every. Time. You deliver each and every time. More consistently than the people who actually get paid to write these characters. Height differences and using one's own sexuality to best an opponent are what OTPs are made of. Great fic! |
![]() ![]() I've missed you! I have to take a moment and collect myself. I'm overwhelmed by emotion. The perfection that was this one shit and the fact you wrote it are taking me on a roller coaster of feels. Please don't stop writing. Please write more in their dark sensual dance. There's nothing all-American or boy/girl next doorsy about my bbs and that's what I love about them and how you write them. I love the angst, I love the darkness, I love the passion. I love BonKai. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was beautiful, somehow. I love how they act around each other, how he is always overwhelmed and weaker around her; and I love how she is always stronger and darker when she is confronting him. As always, loved your writing. I'm glad you keep writing Bonkai. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it, bonkai is so hot |