This was hot and romantic in its own way.

Epic fail. I wish there was more but I really liked it. It was really good

K SJSU there was more but really good

This was so cute! And dang that smut scene was good! The whole thing was also very nicely written, so I'll have to check out your other works too!

oh lol sorry I realized I reviewed for the wrong story...lol...awkward...

Oh my goodness. This is an amazing story. I had so many emotions running through my mind while reading this. I was shipping Lucy with everyone XD. This is seriously so so so so so good. AMAZING JOB!

I actually found myself really disappointed when it ended, I would love if you kept writing! New LaLu fan

I absolutely loved this. There was so much detail and Laxus and Lucy were in character throughout. So well written and such a passionate ending. It was perfect. :D

I love LaLu stories. Thank you for writing this amazing story. It just fits their personality to the T.

So innocent and naughty at the same time!
I love it!

Fabulous job on such a drool worthy piece! Man I wish I could trade places with Lucy...

This is quite adorable~ 3

Lucy teaching Laxus to love.. aw 3 keep it up!

An excellent conclusion for a wild start to a relationship that is going to be bumpy and full of passion. I totally see the whole Mate mindset working perfectly with Laxus and his views of things. As the Slayers seem to be quite boisterous, it only makes sense that they would all have that wild and untamed streak in bed. LOL. Nicely done sex scene. Gotta love it when a writer has the give and take we see in this particular lemon happening.

Well this is an interesting change of pace. I like how Lucy loves storms, but hates the dark. It brings a unique humanity to her character that is the spark to keep interest growing. The strong personality with frail little soft spots capable of becoming catalysts to a deeper emotional attachment. I also like how Laxus is responding to Lucy's complexities and unexpected layers in this chapter. She throws him for a loop time and again, and then proves herself to be a match for his awkward attempts at being social.

Gotta love how Lucy strips away the cockiness Laxus uses as armor, and drags him out of his normal self to make him meet her half way. Excellent. I'm glad I found this little two shot. Must read how it concludes.

I really liked it so cute and different but soo good :) really looking forward to the next part