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Hi

Hoffe das du mal weiter schreiben tust.
Würde gerne wissen wie es nun mit allen weiter geht.

Schau

please more!

Very good! More Please

Cool story. Looking forward to more.

Please please please update soon.

...Nice idea but I'm really tired of someone coming over and saying 'you will join us now' and them just going with it.

MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE

Nice chapter

College is the perfect excuse! It sucks up your time, money, sanity and well being, so how on earth are you going to find time to write?

The ONLY thing I don't agree with is Loki trying to kill Violet just because she's pregnant and doesn't fit in with his world domination schtick. The ONLY reason I would agree with it would be if he were to be under the control of the Mind Gem and Thanos.

And is appropriately apologetic when he gets his own mind back.

Uh, Fury doesn't have any right to tell her that. She can always turn him into something squishy and throw him into a wall if he bugs her.

I'm surprised that he didn't threaten the health/wellbeing/life of her unborn baby.

Fantastic

I loved the chapter, I feel great that Tony is willing to care for a baby that is not theirs , and it is incredible the support of the other Avengers . I hope you can update soon , dying to know what will happen.

Hmmm, I like it, but why did you wait forever to get her to a doctor, I'm sorry but I'm probably going to be rude, but it's unrealistic, you don't just get dropped through time and space and act like you know everyone there already and don't just get rushed to a hospital, she's pregnent, I would have at least thought that instead of gawking at her like she's some hopeless pregnant person they would have instantly rushed her to the doctor :/ and what is up with fury, he's like some jackass, got a stick up his butt, so rude, expecting a pregnant person to just join the avengers like *oh yeah, your pregnant, you got powers, forget you baby, join my milita, I got cake and cookies, with ice cream and sprinkles" I'm not hating I'm really not, I honestly love your story, but it kinda bothers me, how much uncarlessness is in there for not only her, but her child, it was like as much as she care, she was secretly hoping the baby just disappears, T_T, but still to lust after a pregnent woman, shame on you stark.

Lol, I'm sorry for ranting, its a really good story, but it kinda makes my head spin with the unrealistics it's like one of those stories that you read and your just like *what the hell did I read* lol I love it, but it's too much of randomness, you need to neutral it out with some boring real stuff, it has so much potential to become a really amazing story, maybe once your done with writing it, go back later and change it up a little, I can understand not having a lot of time, I'm a college student too, I barely got enough time as it is. Lol, but it doesn't need a lot of work, honestly, just smooth out the the choppy parts of your story and you'll have a smooth amazing pregnant fem Harry love story lol

I really like the story so far. If you want an idea for something to happen next, I think someone from Violet's dimension should show up out of the blue. Like, a close friend of hers that she trusts really well, or even an enemy. I would LOVE to see poor Draco in a world mainly ruled by logic and science. Also, is there magic in the Avenger's world? Or has Violet lost that ability? Thanks!

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