Great story I hope you will make another dragon ball story they are awesome

Who else hummed Cha-La Head Cha-La at the end? It fits the end of this story so well, that it was needed. Anyway, great story. Loved it and have re-read it many times.

This was a good story to read but not was I was expecting to say the least. I thought it would have at least a bit more to do with the zombies crap that a lot of the characters were apart of but other then the lack of that I found this to be really good.

I’m also glad the the favorite moments in the story is was the one I was hoping for as well.

Sadly I can’t help but once again wishing that this story was longer then it was with more things happening in it to see how there training went for everyone and telling how the others were doing as well since there was no mentioning of what happened to Kohta other then going into the military and the short bits here and there with Takagi or Saya as she was also called by in the story. I wonder what you would of had in mind for them here and there.

Guess I’ll check out some other stories that I thought I might not like since there’s a good chance I just might. I did with this one after all lol.

good

Aww~ you didn't feature my personal favorite Super Saiyan form… SUPER SAIYAN GOD SUPER SAIYAN! Aka Super Saiyan Blue. But still a fun story.

This means that Takashi is likely the weakest Super Saiyan EVER! Love the story though.

Just read chapter nine and found the irony in the ring of death

LOVED IT ALL!

And..EVA?! wow...

SS4 God Mode?O.o Possible?

Dbz...the one place god of destruction loses meaning after a few weeks of

thats...a great question...why DIDNT they grab his tail?O_O;

TFS Android 15 :"Analysis...Your an Idiot."
TFS Goku:"HEY!"

didnt like his gold form i take it?

Then again,have u seen KING COLDS transformed states? they look far more menacing..him gaint and gold?yeesh scary...

This reminds me of TFS Piccolo vs 17 :D

Seriously. Learn the correct spelling for the techniqu Goku learned while preparing for Vegeta and Nappa. It's not Kaido-ken. It's Kaioken. Get it right. You insult all DBZ fans by mispelling it all the time.

UPDATE!