great chapter. plz update. Can't wait to read what happens next. Is Hook Going to be with Emma?

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

awesome chapter please tell you plan on updating this and not just give up on it like most authors of hp/once upon a time fics do anyway looking to the next update

please update

Good story but it seems a bit rushed and a bit cluttered

You know that Lily and Hermione are both going to want to hijack Harry so that they can interview him about his life as THE Captain Hook, right?

You are still missing Rumpelstiltskin’s name in a good number of locations. Your other mistakes and errors are easy to forgive.

You misspelled Peverell. Le Fay is also two words not one.

If the letters had been sent when they were eleven, then Emma Swan’s should have got through because she grew up OUTSIDE of the town of Storybrooke, Maine and thus was not subject to the Curse until later in her life. Same for Elisa Maza who grew up in New York City and never went to Storybrooke at all in the first place.

Wait… did Xanatos come with them? I would have thought he would have returned to New York City rather than travel on the Jolly Roger…

Let me guess: Oberon is Voldemort in this fic?

very good, loved

Why did you have some of Harry's current allies arrested when he very well may need their abilities? Loki is going to get his butt stomped when it is discovered he is the one to put Harry in the tournament.

Nice job, but there are some grammar problems

The names disappeared again and only left behind 's in some places where the missing names used to be. *lol* I wonder why its doing it if it WAS in there when you first wrote the chapter? I don't think that's ever happened before. Stupid new glitches that keep popping up around here.

Though I think you should edit this chapter a bit. I think. *lol* 'Harry's' been missing since he was a BABY, with no ID or ANYTHING on baby Harry that could let whoever found and raised him since that Halloween night know what his OLD name was in order to keep the name for him.

Yet as soon as they 'found him', it sounds like Dumbledork is ACCUSING 'Harry' of PURPOSELY ignoring his Hogwarts invitation letters for the last four years, like they SERIOUSLY thought what? That the long lost Potter heir actually GREW UP knowing his OLD name instead of POSSIBLY having grown up under a completely DIFFERENT name for the last '14 years'? All of them are treating Killian like they seriously expected him to have 'remembered' a name he hasn't answered to since he was 15 months old as far as they knew, let alone 'respond' to letters that were addressed to somebody named Harry Potter even IF he ever actually got them to begin with? *lol*

Plus why is Killian putting full blame on why he never received his letters on Regina when he KNOWS why he never received them? Growing up in the past, being stuck in Neverland for who knows how long before finding himself in Storybrooke, etc. Had nothing to do with Regina. *lol*

Though why is Killian letting them call him Harry Potter? As far as he should be concerned, Killian's been his name WAY longer than it was EVER been Harry Potter, so why should he have to change it back to his FORMER name just because everybody else wants him to?

Something tells me that Hook is the grandson of Lady Titania and some other random bloke, yeah? And let me guess, Lily doesn't know who her mum was, does she? Much less who her sister really is.

You really need a beta.

You are forgetting to type out the character name of whoever is speaking to indicate who is actually speaking making dialogue incredibly hard to follow.

I am just going to go out on a limb and ASSUME that the one yelling at Hook over the spell is Henry, because only Henry is in the right age group to actually have WATCHED Gargoyles.

Rumpilstiltskin appears to have been cut off before he could say what he is also known as. I am also going to take back my assumption that it was Henry yelling at Hook cause you neglected to list the fact (or more likely it somehow got erased) that Mr. Gold was there.

No magic other than the magic of the children of Oberon is allowed on the Island and yet somehow both Regina and Rumpelstiltskin made landfall… odd that.

Yeah, that is a good reaction to the statement that Tom just made.

that is good. update soon please.

bravo bravo