hehe, poor wu fei. he had a lot of trouble in this fic. heero was very emotional in this fic. different from other fics but still in a good way.

you might want to spend more time in narrating the story. it is a tad bit too rushed. i do like fast stories but it would be even better if you'd take the time to build up the plot a bit stronger.

Adorable. Only Heero who has never experienced a normal childhood would have the idea to ask Dr. J for love advice. It's something new and sweet for Heero and I love him. I just had to chuckle at Wufei's howl of fury seeing Heero who 'borrowed' his Nataku.

This is much the awesomeness. My only wish is that we could see G's reaction to the apoptosis command. (After all, only J seems to think that emotions are bad, so G probably wouldn't approve of the command.)

aww once again one of you fics has been just too cute! I love it. :D

Nice, not heavy and bit funny.

Great.

Especially this : "Chewing gum is a finer point of life?"

XD

REALLY good! I love it. 'tis swanky

though I SO need to kill J even worse than usual now! XOO

but I'm off to read more fan fiction. UPDATE the rest of your fics!

Very enjoyable!

Too bad there wasn't any retaliation from J.. I mean, he goes to all the effort of making a Perfect Soldier... you don't want a weapon like that running around without a leash..

Chewing gum, chocolate, ice cream... Yes, some of the *finest* points in life.

Along with the one on Wufei's head...

WufeiMuse: WOMAN!

Me: Shut up or I'll turn you into a girl in my next fic.

DuoMuse: Hey, I don't want to have anything in common with *him*! And btw, you need to finish that story.

Me: I know. And I'd make sure he got his own story. *Thoughtful look* Maybe set him up with Quatre.

WufeiMuse: *Cowering, sweating, and pulling collar away from neck* Er...wouldn't Quatre be a better choice to be a girl.

Me: You're the one with long hair.

WufeiMuse: *Whimpers*

Me: *Smirks evilly*

That was a really, really good fic! Keep up the good work!

*giggles* what a cute ending! i liked it but i think trowa was a little ooc.

OMG this was great! Such an awesome fic. Great job! As long as I'm reviewing this, I might as well tell you that I like your writing in general, and I'm a fan of some of your other fics. HOWEVER, I am *dying* for you to finish Welcome Distractions. You haven't updated it in a month! *pokes Rapunzel* Please, PLEASE finish it! I hate it when good authors leave awesome stories unfinished!

That's all for now, keep up the good work!

-Pixie-chan _~

i love this story but you did have me worried in some places keep it up

this is a really good fic. please continue it soon. I luv it loads!

Yay! You updated. This is one of my favourite stories and for a while I thought it had vanished lol. I love the whole idea, the way you used the comparison of apoptosis to what Heero was doing was great! It lets you see in a way just what J thinks of Heero. He's just a single cell amongst thousands of others.

Duo's reaction in this is great too, I love protective Duo! I can't wait to read the epilogue (and I'm loving your "Welcome Distractions" fic too!)

*right eye begins to twitch lightly as she stares at the cliff hanfer before her* Oh no...no no no no no, no you did NOT just end it RIGHT THERE AFTER POOR DUO-KUN BLACKS OUT LIKE THAT! These cliff hangers are intolerable and (as Wu-man would say) and INJUSTICE to such a fine yaoi fanfcition such as this! Please update soon? I mean, we all know you have a life outside of the Gundam Wing and Yaoi universe but yes...you can't just leave us hanging here ;_;*sniffle* Wonderful story, absolutely lovely. Ah, the angst and love and raw emotion is just too beautiful for words. Update soon please _ Good job!