I've never been a fan of alpha bitches. So having The Bitch Queen finally meet her end is cathartic for me. I thank you and I wish you the best.

Fantastic work! The dialog between Mandy and Junior was put together very nicely with Junior outright confronting his mother with a bunch of horrible terrible deeds she committed and Mandy just brushes them aside with out feeling any regret or any joy. You really did a splendid job of showing how cruel and cold Mandy can be. The fight that followed was intense! Mandy seemed like she was going to win with her special weapon, but Junior just turned the tables and beat her.

The little flashback of Mandy holding Junior, when he was first born was very sweet and it did show that in a way she loved Junior. Mandy admitting she's proud of Junior that he beat her was also very nice.

This is a great fanfic and I enjoyed it.

great story

I think the climax would have been a lot more better, and realistic, had mandy just respected junior for killing her instead of the whole "I actually loved" you thing.

and top it off with ominous words like "you will continue my reign" or the like.

Another great story. I loved the battle between Junior and Mandy. All hail the new King.

very very nice

(applause) Aros, I will admit, I usually don't write Mandy as being quite as cold as this, but I loved the fight. I like to think that Mandy does have a soft spot for her kids, but I can understand the point of view that she doesn't. Though, I often make Junior more like her in my fics than others would think appropriate anyway.

Still, I love, LOVE having another writer around. And, congratulations, you beat me to the punch. You had Junior kill Mandy, permanently, before I could in one of my fics. So prompts to you. I expect Junior will find Minnie, and even Mimi's soul in some place or realm. And I look forward to your tale of his reign. Though...I have this image in my hea that he eventually stumbles across Mandy, as a prisoner in some hellish afterlife.

Still, loved the fight, very brutal, and...I love those moments where, after losing, the big-bad smiles at death(literally hear) and acknowledges the victor. And when it family members, it makes it all the greater. And...well, no matter how you look at Mandy, you know she'd be proud of Junior if he reaped her.

So, as one of the first main GT writers, I salute you!

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