Sorry mate but you really should get a beta. Your grammar is just on a level that it is impossible to understand what you wanted to convey. I am pretty sure almost no one was able to read it without re-reading some sentences over and over and they still were impossible to understand.

Also, the story has so many holes in the first chapter alone that it makes the story stupid, which otherwise could have been an interesting story. It makes no sense how everyone would turn on her for what she did. Also, it makes no sense why Naruto would ever give the necklace to another person. I don't remember exactly what he promised Tsunade but it goes somewhere along the line of "take it and become the greatest Hokage/hold the dreams of Dan and Nawaki etc...". As you know Naruto never breaks a promise so it made no sense that he would give it to Sakura and break a promise.

Gross: Sasuke x Hinata

Can't get past the terrible grammar. What's with the capitalized "It" everywhere?! When the first sentence of a story is so mangled that you have to re-read it to understand, you know the story is in trouble. GET A BETA!

What don't like about this fic is that it also tend focus on the other pairing for to long. I'm only here for the narusaku. I just going to skip other pairing parts.

It took 4 YEARS to complete this story & now a new one STARTS?! OKAY but I'd hope it doesn't take 4 years to complete that story.

I don't think that Obito is really dead and is just using Orochimaru to do his work for him.

Still very good n interesting cant wait for the next chapter.

Spoiled your summary's big story hook in the summary itself. 10/10

Seems decent so far though. I'll definitely keep on reading.

I follow all of your Naruto stories why don't you update some of them like I've been waiting for a while now for you to update the rest of your stories

dude this story has so many holes, first a couple of Jonin and genin stop 9 tailed naruto. Bullshit they would have all died . Second erasing Naruto's memories would do. are harm than good. Kurama would tell Naruto would be pissed they erased his memories.

interesting

Okay, here's my (not so)quick review:

I won't talk about your grammar or the way you expressed feelings. I won't even bring up what's canon and not, because it's a FanFiction, right?

Even if it was rude of her to do it so harshly, Sakura has the right to turn Naruto down everyday for the rest of her life if she wants to; it doesn't make her a monster, a bad friend, or heartless. Honestly, if someone harassed me with their unwanted affections for five years— all while treating my crush like crap— I'd turn them down with a bit more edge expressed as well.

The clincher for me is this: He used the Shodai's necklace (a gift and a vote of confidence from the fifth hokage) as a baiting tool. Don't get me wrong, I am fine with gifts— I'm a BIG giver. That's not quite what he's doing here though, is it?

He didn't give it to Konohamaru to encourage him to keep pursuing his dreams after his grandfather died. It was given out of thanks or gratitude to Jiriya or Iruka either. His idea was "this is so expensive and nice, that when I give it to her, she'll like me."

Forget about Sakura's opinion for a moment; He used the heirloom of Tsunade's dead grandfather as a seduction tool. As heartless as it was of Sakura to throw it away, all things considered, Naruto threw it away first.

If it wasn't clear, my very subjective/opinionated issue with this fanfic is something I kind of have an issue with near the end of the canon; petty attractions and one-sided admirations passing off as affections. As attracted as Naruto is to Sakura in this fic, there's clearly no consideration for her.

"If you love something, let it go", right? Well, Naruto didn't.

I loved this chapter as it's starting to get the story moving along after being stalled with the exams for as long as this was. While I'm not too happy about how you've written Kurama in earlier chapters I will say this, he's more in character with how our minds had him when the story of Naruto was brand new. It's kind of fun reading how certain characters are in this story versus how they've been redone over the years by the community. I won't go into specifics with this story but I enjoy how you've given everyone a personality that plays up their canon traits. While most would disagree I think that your pairing of Sasuke and Hinata works very well. They started out as very unsure about their feelings for one another, especially Sasuke, and have grown to the point where Sasuke puts Hinata's safety above his own to the point of taking a kunai for her. All in all, this is one of the best I've followed and is in my top twenty-five fanfiction stories of all time.

As for the other stories of yours that you've listed, I really want to see the Straw Hat crossover and Naruto Uzumaki Mitersshi updated. The crossover story is especially worthy of more and faster-updating chapters. As well as all of your stories are I feel that those two deserve more attention given to them. I'm looking forward to the next update and until then all the best to you.

Well that was interesting so much drama but how the hell does that pussy Ayato have the Kopi it's a Namikaze bloodline isn't it does that make him a Namikaze or something and things are heating up strange that Anko left although good that she saved Ino

This chapter was fantastic! love it