Reviews for Senator, Bounty Hunter, Wizard, Jedi?
LitliTigrisdyr chapter 22 . 6/14
Please continue writing this story! I love it! I am literally craving for more chapters, so I really hope that you will not drop the ff.
Chris J chapter 22 . 5/28
Very good. Please make more chapters
Araytigre chapter 22 . 5/5
Sadly we know that Padme will get back at them for this, even though she knows that the added security is necessary. It will be interesting to see the Council's reaction to their findings, as well as Who truly controls the Clones now (and why). At least Jango is out of the picture for now. Thank You. TTFN
taeggukkim chapter 2 . 4/8
can it be anakin tho hahahahha they are kinda cute ship too.
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 22 . 2/15
I like it a lot!
Lil Lost Lady chapter 22 . 1/16
Very clone focused chapter but what you're doing with them is interesting, will any of them become main-ish characters now? So ever since I read that author's note a few chapters back I've had the feeling I'm in for a sad/tragic end but either way, I can't wait to see where this goes from here. Hopefully, Anakin will get a bit more happiness before anything too terrible happens to him again. I was surprised that he was kidnapped by the dark-side as a boy, more than that though I thought if he did show up it'd be as a villain so I was wondering how the Padme/Anakin pairing was gonna work but you resolved the whole on the dark side thing with him quickly using Harry's magic and Obi-Wan's force combo thing. I still don't completely get it but it was cool. Maybe your note meant that Obi-Wan and Harry were not getting a happily ever after-ish ending, I don't know... do you even still have the same ending in mind?
Lil Lost Lady chapter 12 . 1/15
I just started rewatching Star Wars on Disney plus so I decided to give one of your Star Wars fics a read. And while I've not read all that many crossovers or not it's weird that Anakin's not Obi-Wan's padawan. Anyways I have ten more chapters to read and catch up on so onto the next!
Gregorvich chapter 1 . 1/9
too bad its slash, sounded interesting
USA-Jeanette chapter 22 . 12/31/2019
I am totally in love with this story and eagerly await more. The way you have diverged from cannon is so very believable and you have kept up the intrigue and tension remarkably well. Your characters are well thought out and the development is a joy to read. You are very skilled and I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Thank you for all of your hard work!
Mohammad 'the truth' S chapter 22 . 12/11/2019
Your story is simply put, beautiful. Just hope you update sooner,
M chapter 22 . 12/2/2019
Wow! I liked this a lot more than I thought I would. The crossover wasn’t something I could imagine myself but you described it all beautifully. I personally am a fan of happy endings, but if you find writing a happy ending for this story hard after you have already planned a sad one that’s fine. I’ll just finish reading it alone, when you finish this story. I look forward to what you have planned! Thank you for posting!
Guestinator chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
So he is a bounty hunter that when someone tries to kill him simply removes their memory and runs instead of using that Massive opening to kill his enemy? Well, that is a bad sign for plot holes.
Shodaime Gahokage chapter 9 . 11/16/2019
I am currently reading a fic where every physical injury Anakin took in canon happen to Obi-Wan. and no there is no white vader Obi-Wan he get the best the order can procure so he get a mask like Plo Koon and a duraglass(?) helmet. my guess is that he sound like a non koffing classier Griveous.
Sakihinata chapter 22 . 11/14/2019
A new chapter! Sweet!
I can't to read about the Jedi Council's reaction to the sitation ;)
Tebukif chapter 22 . 11/12/2019
Make whatever ending you want, making your readers suffer for your enjoyment is a bonus to sharing your writing, yes? XD

(although, I would never say no to more if you want to write out extra ending could-have-beens. But I love the way you write. Whatever you choose to do will be the best one!)
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