Naoki's narration was really interesting. I imagine we'll see more of him in the future! However, it'll be nice to get back to the main plot.
Maybe chapters could be a bit longer?

I wonder if this is getting close to the turning point when Takuya and the others go to Earthland...?

I'm interested in seeing when the kids find their blood relations in Earthland. For Tommy, that means having an older half-sister along with having Gildarts as family. For Takuya, that means Natsu is his cousin in a matter of speaking-considering Aguni and Igneel are brothers and that Fire Dragon raised Natsu a bit like his Spirit World counterpart.

*Not sure about the others, though...* (I wonder if they have any family...any at all.)

Zoe might me related to Wendy because they're both Slayers of the same element. (*Not sure about Laxus though...considering from what I herd from the anime, he became a Dragon Slayer because of an implanted item, a lacrama of some kind*)

Kouichi or Koji might be able to find some kinship with the Take-Over power siblings...if I'm not wrong.

(**To the kids, it sounds like Naoki is something of an enigma...a being of mystery, for more or less of a better description.**)

I wonder if Lucy, or Levy, might know of Naoki's non-human mother...considering how much they seem to like reading books.

Great chapter m8 can't wait for more

Another great chapter.

And so our heroes enter a new land . Can't wait to see what happens next.

Great infologue

HOLY CRAP IT SEEMS LIKE EVERYONE IS RELATED TO A FAIRY TAIL WIZARD! TWO IN TOMMY'S CASE!

OOOOOOOOOOO TOMMY AND CANA ARE RELATED TOO?!

In tune with spirits? IS SHE RELATED TO LUCY?!

I may not know a ton-but it sounds as if it may be someone from the Fairy Tail world.

(Granted I'm not mistaken.)

Good chapter maybe be more descriptive...?
Eh. I thought this was good in general despite the length.

Did not see that coming!
Great chapter m8!

I think Zoe might be connected to Lucy since she saw her on the lacerma tv screan mabey they are twin sisters

I think that if Koji hopes to win against this opponent, he's going to have to pull off something rather big...or something similar like that.

I mean if a being like that could summon a demon lord, along with a few others, they are no run-of-the-mill creatures.

Of course he can!
Great chapter m8