Reviews for Start Over
Goldielover chapter 2 . 8/19
Actually, little thought she may like to hear it, Edward made the right decision. The age of consent is sixteen in Washington state, but eighteen when the other person is in a position of authority. As Edward was her teacher and supervisor in her volunteer position, he would be considered to be a person of authority, She was seventeen, and did not yet have the legal right to make that decision. Edward should have explained himself better, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
Is this the one that just rips off greys anatomy? No thanks.
Snappher chapter 1 . 6/27/2019
awwwwwwwwww! Bless poor Edward. Her being so young, I totally get why he thought it wouldn't work out, and that people would think he was a perv! Despite her youth, Bella seems to have her shit together. I've always been an "old soul" like her, too. My dad says I went from 4 to 40 :)
Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2019
There’s something very icky, borderline pedo, about a 32 year old man having sexual feelings for a 17 year old child, yes she’s still a child in the eyes of the law. Why did you have to make her so young? It’s spoiled it for me sadly. I know I’m obviously in a minority, but I can’t help it. When I was that age an older guy paid attention to me and in wasn’t nice, it scared the hell out of me.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 9 . 2/27/2019
It just bugs me she had to do that in the first place... If she wants Edward and has... And is letting try with her. That shouldn't even be a problem to criss out..
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 6 . 2/27/2019
She was 17, he was in a position of authority.

If anything, that should be what he pointed out to her. Fuck a trust... He would have been looked at like a pedophile.
TwoWayMirror chapter 21 . 1/19/2019
This is such a sweet story! Perfect to cheer you up after a long, tiring week. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :)
Siriusmunchkin chapter 12 . 10/20/2018
Story is fun, telling Renee to f o and never appear in her life again would be the smart thing and make the story a whole lot more fun.
Isao84 chapter 21 . 7/19/2018
Sweet sweet story! Thank you so much for it!
cocoapurl chapter 21 . 7/2/2018
Very sweet. Thanks for the story. :)
Just Sus chapter 1 . 3/11/2018
2nd read-through, and I loved it all over again! Thank you...
Goldielover chapter 6 . 10/28/2017
Actually, I think Edward made the right decision about not pursuing a relationship with Bella the summer he met her. She was still only seventeen. While the age of consent in Washington State is only sixteen in most cases, there are a few exceptions to that rule that raise the age to eighteen. As she was a volunteer at the hospital he was working at, and could have been considered to be in a position of authority over her, that rule may come into effect. In any event, Charlie most certainly would have evoked it if he had disapproved of a relationship between them. Edward should have explained himself fully to Bella, though - both about how he wasn't ready, and his concerns about her being only seventeen while he was fifteen years older. She is now older, so this won't be a problem any longer for them.
BridieM chapter 21 . 10/13/2017
A wonderful story. Thank you for sharing your vision with us.
Guest chapter 21 . 10/8/2017
Lovely fic
Congrats
Claire Davis chapter 9 . 7/28/2017
Literally LOVE this story! This chapter-amazing.
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