I wanted this story to be longer

Fun story.

Just curious. How many more times are you going to tell us she steadied her grip around her wand?

Wow! 13-year-old Harry exploded and somehow was reborn into an 18-year-old version of himself! I didn't think this story was that terrible. But now I know for a fact you're just an idiot.

Large amounts of people warned me off of your work. And now I see why.

Putting off the ritual seems a very stupid idea. Like the ONLY reason is to have an excuse for more drama later. Not providing a reason not to do a LIFE SAVING and potentially EARTH SAVING ritual just makes all the characters seem to be extremely stupid and not worth reading about.

loved this story!

Great story I really liked it.

Thanks

Thank you for writing this story I quite enjoyed it. Keep up the great work.

awww I wanted to see supermans response to all this and wonderwomans

Aw, you missed the opportunity for a really cute Potential Bad Pun.

You have LS deadpan, "Really, the pinnacle of modesty." I would have gone with 'the pineapple of modesty' instead. It may be the preverbial "lowest form," but the pun is still bloody humorous. :-)

Interesting story with a very cool ending!

Great mini-series. Please make a sequel.

A-Awesome story, Matt.

Very fun story! I particularly liked the concept and the girls you chose.

Thanks for sharing!