What a wonderful story! So sad that is not complete, because ot was really god how you make your ana, and good description of christian.
And i think you write really well! Very upset to see that you abandoned this story.

More please. Kim

Just when so many things are happening you drop another great story. Why write 3 unfinished stories, it would be more satisfying to readers to have just one finished. You’re such a good writer why quit in the middle of a story, several stories, how disappointing.

Love Ana’s skill at putting Gia in her place. It’s always bothered me that both Christian and Elliot let her pull the overly friendly, unprofessional sex kitten crap. They should call her on it instead of just trying to polite,y fend her off.

I agree with Christian that clearly Carla is interested in Ana for who she is with. I’m hoping Ana doesn’t fall for it .

This story is a joy to read, I love the humor. Ros is great and Christian as a happy camper is fun to read.

Great story. I love that you have Christian actually caring to listen to Flynn instead of just letting it wash over him. That you have Christian caring to try to understand himself and thus better himself is a welcome change from most other writer’s Christian. Love how strong and no nonsense Ana is too. And Rosis a hoot!

Keep up the humor, it’s refreshing.

Another great story from you. Love the tension between Christian and Ana with the humor throw in. It should be an exciting ride for the two of them.

Please continue this story!

Please update soon...

You have created a lovely story here. We readers can only hope you will return soon to complete this work. Thanks for sharing!

hilarious

Please update again

And you leave us with yet another abandoned story.

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Lovely! Hilarious the Shrek moment!