Wow! This was really good and really beautiful. I'm more of Anzu with either Kaiba;) or Yami myself but I can actually believe this. I feel that Jounouchi would feel this way about Anzu if he really gave it the chance. Great poem and keep writing more Anzu & Jonouchi:D

Lovely piece. In a very short space you tell a whole story of sudden realization. It felt very believable. I haven't before considered Jounouchi/Anzu, but now I think I can see it. Thank you for sharing. :)

I'm not expert with poetry but i found this one really sweet. :3