Reviews for Sacrifice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go, Splinter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Go, Mikey! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it's been two years, and an update probably isn't happening, but this story is really good! It's rare to find Apritello in a plot-driven story, and there are so many questions this story focuses on which could have rather fascinating answers. What if the mutants worked together with the EPF against the Kraang? What consequences would there be for this? What about Shredder's mutants, would they rebel against him for the chance to be human again? Will this finally create a harmonious society for humans and mutants? Suffice it to say there are still so many directions you could take this plot, not to mention the possibility of added elements like an advanced Kraang invasion, Triceraton assistance or further attack, or even Shredder using the turtles new public personas to launch an attack of his own. I'll keep this story saved in my favorites in hopes for an update, but even if it never comes, I'll still patiently appreciate the good storywriting for what it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaahhh I loved this chapter! Thank you for writing about the Foot mutants, and how they maybe DON'T LIKE being mutants! I thought I was the only one who cared. I'm really enjoying reading this story, can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy to see this in my inbox. I backtracked and re-read all of the other chapters. Was so tickled that you included Ace Duck! Nicely done. Can't wait to see what else is happening in this newly mutated New York! Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww that was nice. Liked the flower girl. Can so see her in the lair. Raph is a secret softy. Interesting chapter. Good going. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First of all - yay for an update on this story! I was beginning to fear it had been abandoned. This was a very entertaining chapter. Shasta is a great character. Kudos to you for creating a likeable and interesting OC. That's rare. And her Queens accent is perfect and so fitting to her character. I could totally hear her voice in my head. :) The is a fascinating story, so I look forward to you continuing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I remeber this story from when I didn't have an account. Good story. Can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jesus this is good! they should have done this in the show. love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa talk about intense! Geeeee! Am on the edge of my seat. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is awesome! Love seeing the world get turned upside down by mutants walking amongst them...fascinating stuff! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good work, and adorkable interactions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That Spider Bytez guy never ceases to be annoying. You pegged his character really well. I'm really enjoying this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Who's the four eyed duck? . . . That is all. XD |