Eso es verdad. Elizabeth tiene a meliodas comiendo de su mano.

Interesante un fic con la temática de enredados.
Los ladrones son hermanos... Y en cuanto a la madre vivian... No me dará pena cuando muera

Ohhh I enjoyed reading this the cl if hanger is making me want to read more see an update soon..

When will you update this story?

Ahhh! I love it! I hope you update soon!

NNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Eli is gonna get so confused. I love this story, so cute!

Can't wait for the next update, very addictive story so far, keep up the great and amazing work!

This needs to be updated RIGHTNOW! I NEEDZ THIZ

Fffh, this story is enticing, man Meliodas definitely is an interesting character in this story

I'm reviewing again to save your soul lol. This is an amazing story! I simply love Tangled and Meliodas being a scumbag here is pretty interesting. I really want to see him soften up to Ellie and what they're day out on the surface will be like!

I'm late to the game but PLEASE continue this!

really... just like the movie tangled

This was really fun to read! I hope you'll be continuing it in the future because I am very curious to see how everything plays out. No pressure, though, I promise!

while reading this review, you should listen to Bromance by Ryan Higa
I LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORIES LADY! They are always amazing and show so much character, especially this one and Heads or Tails, where you change Mel's and Juvia's personalities. Keep up the godly work!
I LOVE YOU IN THE MOST HETEROSEXUAL WAY

I really love the entire portrayal of Hawk, Elizabeth and Meliodas' personalities! You could really see in their conversation and actions that they really do match the manga and anime, even though this is an AU.

And Mel is such a scumbag! I have to agree with you there. And the last line gives me all the feels. I think you punctuated it with a mark that will be left on me forever... I'm scarred for life. (In a good way. :)

Eliza is so naive but hopefully we get to see her toughen up a little when she reaches the surface. And I also hope that Mel sees that Elizabeth is that precious thing Vivian wants to keep away from the outside world! Cannot wait for the next chapter, but take your time. I will wait patiently for gratifying updates like these. :)