Muy bueno.

This was a magnificent series that I am sad to read is over in only four chapters. You captured the cadence, the way the Doctor and River act well, and made it fit so seamless into the Star Wars story. It really did feel as if it was part of the history of the Doctor's universe, another historical event that happened and the Doctor is visiting like any other point in history he has time traveled too. I love how the jedi did pick up on some things, and what the Doctor let slip. I know I wouldn't mind you writing changes because your writing is the kind that I would be curious where you would take it instead of just wanting to see a happier ending or Qui-Gon not dying for example. Thank you for writing this series.

Interesting, maybe the simple fact that Anakin saw the doctor scan Palpatine for a lightsaber means that when he tries to cultivate a relationship with Anakin, Anakin will be wary of him and his name will pop into his head when Dukoo mentions a Sith is controlling the Senate.

Good stuff. Now I'm wondering, how does the doctor know when something is a fixed point? River is obviously assuming that since the TARDIS brought them here there is something that they can do to effect major change but the doctor disagrees. Is it something innately Time Lord that is warning him?

Wow, this is great. I love how you have perfectly captured the recklessness of the doctor barging into a situation that we actually know all the details of, as opposed to him investigating a mystery that is hidden from the viewers as well, at least initially. It gives A great new perspective on what is essentially just another adventure for the Doctor.

This... this is going to be amazing...