I read all chapter of this.I am a pure fan of story changed me in positive way.

OMG you made me cry!
I spent almost all my life reading and yet no story but this one made me cry.
It was amazing though, I loved it.

Not how I wanted it to end, but your story was amazing. The complexity of the story and the depth of the character, especially Peter, was incredible. You did a great job with this story.

Nervously, huh? Hmm. I wonder what that could mean...

Sorry, I've been over-thinking everything since I watched Civil War. Man, was that movie sad.

Anyways, great chapter and great ending. I loved it!

AWESOME! I loved what you just did in that chapter!

I liked this chapter better than most of the rest. Good job on your story it was good.

Omigod, this is the second last to chapter! Don't you hold me in suspense, Nyanwolf I must know how this thing ends! Update! Update!
Also I meant what I said in my last review because you are tearing my heart to pieces now.
I never seen Peter so suicidal, and then Wish Master gives up on him and then May dies.
My heart is non-stop beating. How is he going to get through this? How am I going to get through this?!
Update soon!

Wow...just...wow...

Whelp. I don't know how to feel right now. That's great.

Tokyo Ghoul. I haven't seen that in that in a while. I probably need to rewatch that.

At first I thought it was Ava but it was Aunt May... OK but..
You killed her? That's not fair... (*sobs) You cannot take all happiness from him!
He is paralyzed, he is sad, he is alone, he is... OH GOD!
Do you enjoy misery?
Can't there be some happiness?
I was crying!... :(
What more is there dude?
You said he watched all his friends die...? but it was of only Ava?
Will he become better again? will his attitude change towards his friends after watching them in different ways than in real world?
Whatever, this chapter's sad...so sad...
let me cry now... :'(

Holy carp dude that was. .. Super sad. Please at least make peter and ava together at end

Sorry haven't been reviewing. School (shudder of horror)
Anyway Wish Master's past is as mysterious and toxic as he is. The whole origin is freaky and terrifying, good job! Especially the whole nettle flower.
And just the idea of giving him something to rip away. Chills.
Fav line: This isn't a partnership! No you're right, you're my slave. Just a badass boast.
The whole future with his old team mates are sweet. Like Jessica and Luke and Sam with Kaelynn 2. I love their sibling relationship.
And Danny young as ever with a son! His son is a mini-him!
Of course, love is what breaks the camel's back.
I wonder what Peter's decision will be! Can't wait for more.
Your stories are not bad! Look at WKHWWSH and Traitor. OMIGOD Traitor was a masterpiece of drama and love and suspense. Plus you made so many readers (I included) laugh, cry, cringe and generally happy. Besides there's only two kinds of stories and good stories, the good ones are the ones that people enjoy. So in that sense, yours are fabulous.
Update soon!
Have you've seen Everday Superhero by New Prussia. It's everything the show should pick up on. Seriously just make the team leave.
Can't wait for more! And summer!

not want to end up like that .. too sad for peter ...

Please at end make peter and ava together!

wow, I hope this is another mind game!