Reviews for Empty Promises
WOLFJADE28 chapter 13 . 12/13/2015
Wow...this chapter is pretty close to intense, especially with the samarai lesson. Altogether a great chapter though! Keep it up LADYOFSOULS! .
KerryAnne chapter 13 . 12/13/2015
Great chapter. Please continue :)
WOLFJADE28 chapter 12 . 12/8/2015
Ooohhhhh...awesome chapter LADYOFSOULS! . I look forward to more!
I Love Kittens too chapter 12 . 12/8/2015
I'm glad Faith is not in that orphanage anymore. She went through a lot. I hope Dusty will recover quickly for her injury, a broken leg. Ouch!
I Love Kittens too chapter 11 . 12/8/2015
Poor Leo! He turned red as Raph's mask.
Pheonix500 chapter 11 . 12/5/2015
I've found this story particularly interesting as it is an insight into the characters of the Foot soldiers as people, rather than faceless cannon fodder (or as is frequently the case in the cartoon series, an unlimited set of identical robots). I always enjoy a story more when villains are complex and ambiguous and demonstrating their very real and difficult situations is very effective at accomplishing this.
Additionally, there is a great attention to detail in the descriptions of ninjutsu training which I find both fascinating and educational. It adds a layer of authenticity to the story as a whole. And of course, the mentions of very real social and criminal issues confronted during the turtles' vigilante work in this story and others, raises general awareness of said problems, which is important.
I look forward to seeing how the less common, spycraft plot will play out with the new undercover agents.
KerryAnne chapter 11 . 11/14/2015
Hah. Leo should never have whacked Raph. Should have known better.
CrazynSane chapter 11 . 11/14/2015
wowwwwwww...intense doesn't even begin to cover this...great job LADYOFSOULS...it's great to see you up and running again...
I Love Kittens too chapter 10 . 10/6/2015
Good chapter! Let's see what is happening next. I won't think that Faith will hurt Donnie.
FujoshiAddict2020 chapter 10 . 10/1/2015
I'm liking this story. Still alot to be revealed but I'm excited for the next chapter. As I'm hoping there will be turtle babies in this story i hope. But cant wait for more. Although in my opinion i think their a little too trusting with the foot ninja girls. Just saying.
CrazynSane chapter 9 . 9/29/2015
ooohhhh...l am totally loving this story LADYOFSOULS...though that's not a surprise to me...your stories are always accurate and interesting...love them, and you are awesome...and l am also very interested in how Leo and Dusty develop as a pair...
Was Splinter's question of 3 additional FC members Dusty wanted to help out rhetorical, or was there a hidden meaning and purpose behind that specific number? l'm sure Donnie, Raph, and Mikey are curious as well
I Love Kittens too chapter 9 . 9/29/2015
Dusty was really worn out by the training with Mikey. She is completely worn out.
I Love Kittens too chapter 8 . 9/29/2015
I hope Leo and Dusty chattings evolves into friendship and maybe into a nice relationship.
I Love Kittens too chapter 7 . 9/29/2015
Karai is a very dedicated ninja, so she would make her students success on all of the Ninjutsu lessons.
I Love Kittens too chapter 6 . 9/29/2015
I hope Leo could help her. Not a bad idea from Mikey.
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