Reviews for The Great Duel
Guest chapter 1 . 12/13/2019
Ahahahhaha! Poor Shika
StorytellerNew chapter 1 . 7/17/2018
really good. I liked the humor and the thinly veiled romance...
StorytellerNew chapter 1 . 7/17/2018
really good. I liked the humor and the thinly veiled romance...
HurZysn chapter 1 . 5/9/2018
loved this one shot
merendinoemiliano chapter 1 . 4/28/2018
Epic
OneAznDragon chapter 1 . 11/6/2017
That was a fun read, thanks for the one shot.

~OneAznDragon
Guest chapter 1 . 7/24/2017
Cool story!
magicofantasy chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
Awesome I love it
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2017
SasuSaku has never been perfect, but at least it progressed naturally. But what Kishimoto did with Naruto... Well, let's just say that I think that sakura had a far better position at understanding Naruto than Hinata ever had. In fact, I don't think Hinata ever understood him. She just wanted his kid. NH is only likeable when accepting it as it is. Instead, most of the fandom deform it to something which is so unrelated to canon that it seems more like they're bashing the canon characters.
Sadly, it seems like Kishi gave in to this fandom, and twisted Naruto into something he should never have been. This newest manga only seems another insult to a long line of insane decisions. Naruto's progress as a character, as well as his conclusion, would've made far more sense if he had stayed away from NH. If Kishi had really planned NH from the start: Naruto shouldve had some meaningful moments with Hinata. Instead, we went from Naruto completely ignoring Hinata's feelings, to him have a kid with her. With zero development.

Not that I like NaruSaku any more than I do NaruHina, but I do think that it would've made more sense. The Last only served to prove my point in that contrast.
Min-chan17 chapter 1 . 4/30/2017
lovely darling
MysticChemyst chapter 1 . 2/22/2017
Awww, super duper cute! I almost want more! And I say almost because while I would love to read more, this little oneshot is great on its own and doesn't need more chapters mucking it up. ;)
Mala137SHL chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
And then this Hima who acting all cute and innocent to avoid trouble.
Smart girl, hahaha :-P
WhatzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzUP chapter 1 . 7/27/2016
Loved this the first time I read it, loved it the second time as well.
yungjeezy chapter 1 . 6/1/2016
Ayee thats pretty good :D
satomika chapter 1 . 4/4/2016
Nice!

It was funny and awesome!

I love it! :D

And I so totally love the participation of the other characters in this fic! :)
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