Castle should have turned to the pool boys, exaggeratedly pump his fist and say, "And that's how you do it!" Other than that, a bit of follow through, it was hilarious

Wonderful prompt. Thank you for writing!

I've read this before, but just saw it posted on castlefanfics tumblr and enjoyed the re-read.

I truly love this one.

Nothing like a little jealousy to get guys to appreciate their women.

Very funny.

Nice story please add the chapter from after they lef the restaurant

Nice! I like it!

Very cute story

This was an unusual prompt but you managed to handle it very nicely. It was good to see a "standard" married couple (and thankfully soft) fight and how they worked it out. Extra kudos for that moment when he manages to sweep her off her feet with a reminder of his (although sometimes disregarded) feelings for her (too cute).

What a fun story! Sounds like the occasion needed the lift that the rude attention forced Castle into. How could he be around her and not pay attention to her? Their vacation just became 100% better!

I kno it's a one shot but u should really develop the aftermath of irritated Caskett and their verbal make up. Maybe even mentor bag boy who was embarrassed. Nice story!

When I originally saw the alert for this, I had no idea what to expect. In fact, my original reaction was – WHAT? Hehe. But it ended up being such a deceptively deep, wonderful thing. I'm not surprised, because your work is so often wonderful. But I am glad. This was lovely.

Read the prompt at the end, after reading the story . Wow, this was way, way, better than the prompt suggested. Well done! I liked how you built up so much of the story before the pool boys even entered the picture.

Excellent!