| Reviews for Omniverse Shift |
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  Keith V chapter 1 . 8/26 (*rambling and pacing around*) I have been waiting her for like (*extend arms*) a lot! I feel that I have been ****blocked, wait6 if there is or not a lemon of the squirrel and the ultimatrix or Omnitrix bearer I forgot! Oh is just me waiting for this story to update. Tho I could read that other story, but I realized with clues that a Nickelodeon character is in there! AH! *Breathing inhale and exhale* calm down Keith. Calm down. Good thing I stop right there before anything happen. Talk about boundary break there. But who know. For anyone reader or author. Know this *pause for a bit* waiting so long other scenario would pop up in any person mind. know what may happen or may not happen. Sometimes a persons urges would overcome that person. Tho I don't like that one scene that mother****** pin down the squirrel and do the ludicrous things to her. Getting off track *coughs* Like I was saying. Due time a paused story would make some people think something that may or may not happen next. Tho it may just be me saying that could but may not be philosophical. In due time. (Don't blame me for a sudden expand dong or wetness Puhh.) Makoto will get Ben's nuts. And there will be lemon...creampie. |
| AnimeGoji91 chapter 24 . 10/15/2019 Make sure you make Ben and Makoto are have future kids of Son and Daughter they name Kenji and Makoto Junior or Mako in this story and help them to fight evil and save this world!? Please continue this story please!? |
 Slackboy101 chapter 24 . 10/8/2019 I'm just wondering if Rook will show up and what will happen to Ragna in Central Fiction |
| Slackboy101 chapter 23 . 10/8/2019 Shit I don't know weather to picture Wiz and Boomstick or Jim Ross and Jerry "the King" Lawyer |
| Slackboy101 chapter 20 . 10/8/2019 Oh the thought of Ben being on the receiving end of the Shades of Eros... that will be funny and awkward at the same time |
| Slackboy101 chapter 17 . 10/8/2019 The thought of Rath and Azreal fighting is making me hyped |
| Omnisaurus chapter 20 . 9/4/2019 *sees the harem comment before a troll face replaces my own* Is that foreshadowing I see? |
| Omnisaurus chapter 18 . 9/3/2019 In defense of Ben, it was technically Azmuth who named Atomix. |
| joshua.feijo10 chapter 24 . 8/14/2019 cade o proximoooo aaahhhh |
| joshua.feijo10 chapter 22 . 8/14/2019 Albeedo |
| AnimeGoji91 chapter 19 . 7/20/2019 Tao vs Food is a fucking funny my ass it just like watch a Saturday Morning Cartoons and Tao is like between Bug Bunny and Road Runner and Kira is like Bad Guy I don't know but is Fucking FUNNY and I never stop reading this story of your Seanzilla115! |
| AnimeGoji91 chapter 13 . 7/20/2019 I almost forgot did that means Kevin is now have a Three of Harem KevinXGwenXTaoXShina and now Ben and Makoto will be BenXMakoto and Ben and Makoto will laugh that ass off at Kevin he have Three Girlfriends of Gwen, Tao and Shina and boy is going to be funny as Hell-NO as Fuck! And I hope you plan make Ben X Makoto and Kevin X Gwen X Tao X Shina in this story!? |
| AnimeGoji91 chapter 24 . 7/19/2019 Please more Story of Ben Tennyson X Makoto Nanaya and I love this story about Benkoto or Makoben! |
| doomqwer chapter 24 . 6/22/2019 huh we have junko around another makoto lets hope she does not end up killing herself again |
| doomqwer chapter 22 . 6/22/2019 i fear for any poor bastard that catches junkos interesting i mean she does all of her despair stuff out of pure boredom god knows what would happen if someone held her interest ... my god yandere junko came up in my mind and that is a scary thought |
