great story

It’s hilarious how Tsuna’s like “legally”

I loved it so much and I now this is the kind of fanfiction I would read again and again at least once every year

Last fanfiction? I hope you are still wiritng though. This is one of the best fanfics I've read. I wish ElenaTsuna is canon

I gasped out loud at the last part, and now I'm crying.

So, I read this story ages ago, but I started to reread it yesterday because I remembered that I loved the creativity behind certain plot points. That still remains true.

There are a few spelling or grammar errors that a little bit of clean up might help to improve the flow of the story, but it certainly doesn't detract from the messages.

Elena is deeply flawed. People point out her mistakes, and they have real consequences. She knows these things, herself, but she continues to try her hardest. Her heart is good and her intentions are true, but her faults remain clear and are reflected through cause and effect.

I think the most important part of this story and the character of Elena is that she grows. She came from a hopeless place, but never truly let that cause her to falter. Even after running away, she finally learns to deal with her pain with the help of others. There is always a place for independence, but her stubbornness and secret thiirst to prove herself would have cause her and others a world of more pain and suffering if she hadn't learned to let go and fully trust. It was really important to me that it wasn't instantly healed by magical s*xy flame times. Heh.

I love this story so much. Truly important to read.

There are many things I like about Elena, but the greatest among those reasons is that, while she may be reckless and selfish, she is the type of reason that I've always craved to see in such arguments. Way too often do people back down in stories and meekly allow things to happen around them. Elena is not a passive character; submissive or not, she is an active and dynamic character at her heart and I greatly enjoy it. It always annoyed me so much when main characters in these types or stories allow what they stand for to be so easily torn down. Her loyalty may be a weakness, but it's also her greatest characteristic.

The fact that Tsuna's own friends and guardians are always so quick to believe the worst of her is absolutely irritating, if you take all that about her personality into account.

Rereading this never gets old! I always remember why I fell in love with Elena.

that quote... from tvd

At first, I just read this fic for fun and entertainment- but damn, this fic hits so close home. I just- want to say thanks. Well, thank you for writing this fic.

Oh no I’m crying
Halp

I just wanted to thank you for such a great story. Reading Elena's life and her evolving relationships in the KHR universe was thrilling and I haven't been able to let go of this story till I finished it in one day.
Once again, thank you for such an amazing read.

wow ...that's really hot

These 54 chapters flew by! Honestly, I didn't even realize I was at the end of the story, until I realized that there was no 'next' button! I loved it! It's a great story, although Elena makes me laugh so much, I got frustrated sometimes as well. All the characters were frustrating sometimes, but that's what makes a good story, because that means they make mistakes and are human (not quite the Mary Sues and Gary Stus) Otsukaresamadesu!

I really have fun reading this fic. Thanks for sharing this with us.

I’m glad I read this again! It brought me to tears and had me dying of laughter! Thanks for this awesome story!