It was a very interesting oneshot! I certainly liked it! There were a few grammatical mistakes here and there, which I'm sure can be avoided with the use of a beta. I liked the story a LOT, because of the way Lily and Scorpius are portrayed. It's not the typical teenage-story with both of them rolling in angst. It was certainly enjoyable, and I liked the style of writing.
Great job.

That was just lovely to read!

Was so excited when i saw the update . Is this the one shot or is there more to it? Enjoyed! Write more

really sweet but too short! plz write more!