Reviews for Ride on the Erotic Express
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23
I know some people complained about the ending and that Harry got fucked over. My personal take was that they then talked about it and did it again, ultimately leading to Ron getting left sooner rather than later.
Regardless it was a great well written story which made me laugh at the end. Thanks
Falvern chapter 1 . 12/3/2017
Well...it was a pretty great story until that ending haha. The ending honestly kinda ruined it for me. Ron raising Harry's kid? Harry still ending up with Ginny? That whole 19 years later shtick? Even Rowling admitted that the ending was a mistake. And throwing Lavender into the mix changed nothing?

Well regardless, it was well written nonetheless.
1066wthec chapter 1 . 2/9/2017
lol
Alex2909 chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
nice train ride
DragonTamer01 chapter 1 . 8/25/2016
Not a bad story at all. I'll definitely send you a PM if I come up with any request ideas (they'll probably all be Harry Potter ideas).
Dragonjek chapter 1 . 7/16/2016
"Not to mention, Lavender was currently experiencing the thrill of being sexually pleasured by her boyfriend's best friend on a public train. Hermione wasn't cruel enough to ruin something like that."

Er... you sure it's not just a little way of getting revenge on Ron? That's generally the sort of something you try to keep people from doing.
InquisitorCOC chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
This story is bloody good.

You really need to write a giant squid tentacle smut story, preferable with Lily
Guest chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
awesome! I like this fanfic!
Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 11/30/2015
Yeah, it IS a good thing "ickle Ronniekins" is so naive! :-D
morring star chapter 1 . 11/27/2015
Another great story look forward to more.
DesertSandBox chapter 1 . 9/19/2015
this was awesome be great to read a story where harry knocks up luna in
SoraxKairi7 chapter 1 . 9/8/2015
I don't even know what to say
thealphamale chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Great one-shot! Although I thought it was dumb to have Hermione still end up with Ron. It's insanely ridiculous.
HarryHermioneEdwardBella chapter 1 . 7/22/2015
awesome start
EndlessChains chapter 1 . 7/17/2015
A well done story. Well this was quite interesting to read and must say that this threesome was the first that I have seen. The lemon was well done as it was very detailed and hot to read as Hermione, Lavender, and Harry get a bit frisky on the train. It was also very amusing and hilarious to read as Hermione knocked Ron out with a punch as he approached and the fact that Hermione was caught so easily. I have to be honest that I was expecting a bit more of a Harmony ending after such an event, but your ending was amusing and interesting with the three remembering after Hermione and Ron's wedding. So it sort of ended in a Harmony way with Harry having a harem. Thank you. Keep up the good work.
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