Reviews for Lack of Resistance
DanBrownfan chapter 9 . 7/4
I really enjoyed every chapter -all the flirting and how they talked about everything. Its a shame you are on hiatus, but I'm glad you left us this happy chapter. It warmed my heart, so cute!
As you said, relationships can also be happy and entertaining for themselves, no need for fighting-scenes, kidnapping, and drama. Also, your writing Is so Easy and welcome to read (the writing of the sex scene was a little weird and different from the rest of the fanfic, but I Guess I get why). You really took the characters out of the cliché-boxes we've put them in (you know, those traits that arent canon but by over repeating them in fanfics, they become FF-canon) and went beyond, by showing their emotional potential. Im really happy to have read your work, It warmed my heart at times, and as weird as It sounds I could sympathize with Sasuke and Hinata's nerves on the first chapters and also the happiness that followed -not every writer can convey that. Kudos to you for writing such a unique story.
DanBrownfan chapter 5 . 7/3
Butterflies in my stomach!
So cute and exciting... The flirting Is on-pooooint! Love your writing style.
DanBrownfan chapter 4 . 7/3
Hi! This crush development Is so cute, and I really like all the flirting you included. Btw I am gladly surprised to read for the first time in a while, a strong-dont-disrespect-me Hinata.
(Note: Your rants are very funny!)
Mochi1376 chapter 8 . 6/25
I was just looking for fanfictions to read. Also, this one's pretty good.
stefu0817 chapter 9 . 6/3
Pls finished the story
Guest chapter 8 . 6/2
This is an awesome chapter. Keep up the good work!
AmethystQtpie chapter 9 . 4/30
aaww, that's kinda cute i think. it's quite difficult to find Sasuhina stories that isn't cringy but yours is amazing! looking forward to your next update!
shyhinata144 chapter 9 . 4/19
I love your SasuHina interactions. You’re able to make Sasuke mushy but still in character. Same for Hinata, she’s playful yet bashful at the same time. I look forward to seeing more SasuHina moments, but also good moment with friends.
Just quick question why do you keep saying Hinata has wavy/curly hair?
Anyways, looking forward to what comes next!
HoneydeCM chapter 9 . 4/9
Read this for idk how many times now. This story is sweet . The pacing is delightful. It's not lagging, it's not too fast. It's just right. I love your timeskips. I'm not really a fan of stories being streched too much as I have a bit of an impatient streak so the timeline of the scenes in the story is just perfect for me. Although there are occasional spelling or grammar errors, the story speaks a lot of things. Every word of every scene has just the right amount of tone and meaning behind it. Everything is at the right place and in the right time. Nothing is out of place. Even the lemon scene did not seem rushed as there was already a hint that they were doing it. I commend that as stories featuring lemon scenes every chapter just ends up making the story bland and repetitive and predictable. I like that you didn't do that as it makes a sense of anticipation of what's going to be on the next chapter. It's also realistic and relatable and creates empathy from the readers. I love that their relationship maintained it privacy even when it became public. This way showed the authenticity and vulnerability of a romantic relationship. I have lots more to say but I'm forgetting them with the rush in my mind. I think I'll just leave them when I read it again in the future and hopefully by that time this will be updated. Overall, I really love this story and can't wait foe more. Please keep up the pacing though as well its free flow ideas. It makes the story and their relationship progressive and developing. It has growth like that. And the atmosphere and tone of the story is really romantic and peaceful in the sense that there is no unnecessary quarrels. Their communication with each other is great too as they are honest with each other. Showing good growth in a character's individuality and their relationship is always a big plus for me. Ideally, theirs is the perfect relationship built on trust and not deceit or jealousy. Their the right kind and amount of clingy too (just based on my mind's direction, idk bout others). My gosh I'm still rambling. I haven't gotten over this yet, urgh. Fine I'll end here.

PS. No hate please. This is only my opinion. I respect other reader's thoughts so there's no need to release hate here .
Lucy chapter 1 . 2/6
I'm just starting the fic and ur rant in the start is sooooo funny jsjsjsjsj also miss if that's u in ur profile picture,ur JORJUS. Anyways sorry for the mini weird rant, I can't wait to read
Reikan chapter 1 . 12/27/2019
Yeeehh me too, i stop watching naruto and boruto
Guest chapter 6 . 12/7/2019
Girl you need to update this asap! I need SasuHina fics to get through this long weekend ! Come back
RougishLady chapter 4 . 12/7/2019
Girl you’re hilarious! Please update soon
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2019
I love your story babe. Please keep writing Sasuhina fellow shipper. My OTP3
Sarah chapter 3 . 8/11/2019
I don't know if you're still active in this account or in the writing process but I wanna tell you that your story is the first story that really satisfies me without all the fights and the kidnapping shit lol I love how you characterize them so well especially sasuke as a mysterious person you did a good job so good for you are awesome
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