This story is hilarious, interesting, original, touching, and unique.

AW! Cute x-mas fic! :D

that was so pretty. I am in tears. It is so wonderful. I loved the story. A very nice job you did. The team rocekt touch was nice. i was right about the ring. (i like being right) Over all i would give the story a 15 out of 10.

Draco

oaky that ending was a tease but a very nice touch. Liked the song. Veyr nice. Liked Ash picking the ring for Misty. And if am wrong well it is not the first time.

Okay, I'm almost starting to wish that you weren't as good a writer as you are. That way, when I run out of stories to read, I won't miss it as much. Because this one was another really good one. Although you foreshadowed a bit heavily with the whole proposal thing, it came close enough to the event it wasn't bad. I can't really tell if you foreshadowed the parents bit, other than Ash on the phone with Hikari. I think not. But anyway, it was a really good story, I liked the ending, the proposal, and the bit with the two kids talking to Misty the most.

And that's all I have to say. Wow, this review turned out really short.

And for this story's quote, I wanted to just put down the whole song, "These Walls". It all fits Misty wanting to show Ash her problems, and not being able to, even though he already sees her pain. Here's a bit:

"Tear down these walls for me

Stop me from going under

You are the only one who knows

I'm holding back

It's not too late for me

To keep from sinking further

I'm trying to find my way out

Tear down these walls for me now."

So, yeah. I think I have five stories of yours left to review now. I'm going to miss being able to just pick out a new one. Oh, well. Maybe when I've

finished all these, I'll finally take the time to finish my own story's first chapter.

James

this story was so sweet!

What a weird excuse to give up your children... Oh well, very cute. I liked it. Nice job. You are so good at writing fluffy moments.

Oh, my goodness! This story was amazing! A Real Tear Jerker! Awesome, awesome, awesome! By the way, did I say it was awesome? Because it is.

Wonderful story, it got me tears in my eyes snif

AMAZING! I may have read this story really late after it was finished but it was EXCELLENT! This story was sad, and extremely touching, I almost cried. ALMOST. Anyways, keep writing really, really good stories like this one.

AMAZING! I may have read this story really late after it was finished but it was EXCELLENT! This story was sad, and extremely touching, I almost cried. ALMOST. Anyways, keep writing really, really good stories like this one.

That was the greatest story ever!I LOVE IT!

!After reading school days I thought That was one of the best AAML fanfics there was until I clicked on your name to find your other names... This fanfic was really sweet, what can I say but WoW~
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ps: I hope you update "Dangerous Love"

So nice and aw - little kids are adorable. What about that day?
INquiring minds need to know! (ie me)
More more more!

Aww this is such a sweet story. I love it